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  • I'm Your Apocalypse

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    need more 2 read! haha
    June 5th, 2011 at 06:03am
  • Star Angel

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    love this please add more soon
    June 5th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • mistery gurl

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    as long as he doesnt pressure her, or get frustrated if she doesnt tell him right away, she might start to confide in him more, if that makes sense.
    June 4th, 2011 at 09:38am
  • LindsaySometimes

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    I love this story. Though, it was a bit confusing at first from where it says max and then it is all of the sudden matt.
    I can't wait for more(:
    June 4th, 2011 at 09:30am
  • mistery gurl

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    i kinda want her to say something, obviously not a sentance, but when shes signing to johnny or something, and gets frustrated, and swearing. i reckon that would crack everyone up :)
    June 1st, 2011 at 10:03am
  • laceyvengeance

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    not gonna lie, when Jimmy joked with the whole silent treatment thing, I laughed.(: and this story's pretty darn good! can't wait to read more(:
    June 1st, 2011 at 08:45am
  • Star Angel

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    please update soon i love love love this so much
    May 31st, 2011 at 10:42am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it :) hahaha jimmy, silent treatment! made me laugh :)
    May 31st, 2011 at 08:01am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it, johnny almost needs to stop, and act more like a friend. i know people say parents shouldnt act like thier kids friends, but i think johnny needs to, to get a feel for her, and to understand her more. maybe find out what she likes doing, and go with her... update again soon :)
    May 31st, 2011 at 07:28am
  • IStoleRennie.

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    i love what your doing with this but it did get a bit confusing in the chapters that still has max as matt.
    May 22nd, 2011 at 12:28pm
  • mistery gurl

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    loved the forgotten update :)
    May 17th, 2011 at 07:37am
  • Star Angel

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    you lost some of the chapters you had up just a fyi
    May 16th, 2011 at 01:46am
  • mistery gurl

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    they need to take it easy on her, also are you gonna start callingmatt S shadows? it ,ight be a bit less confusing :)
    May 15th, 2011 at 10:38am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Oh yes, very sad video. Made me tear up big time. But, I did laugh at the scene with the kids where the kid portraying Jimmy (I believe) runs out of the convience store with the beer/wine coolers, I laughed so hard there. Anywho, amazing update though. Hm...i'd say Matt as in her cousin Matt or Johnny ....Jimmy? I don't know. I must find out. : ) Lol.
    May 14th, 2011 at 09:06am
  • SimplyEmah

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    Love the story :D
    I got emotional when I saw the video...I was balling by the end of it
    May 13th, 2011 at 01:41am
  • Star Angel

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    Love the update please add more soon i hope it is matt her cousin that would be cool but idk please add more soon
    May 12th, 2011 at 10:56pm
  • Through-the-Night

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    Oh! I'm guessing it was Brian or Matt, although I hope its Brian.
    May 12th, 2011 at 10:45pm
  • mistery gurl

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    matt saved her.......
    May 12th, 2011 at 10:27am
  • KellShadows

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    Zacky's about to get into ALOT of shit..... Loved the up-date, hope you up-date again soon! =D
    May 12th, 2011 at 09:02am
  • Star Angel

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    love this cant wait to see what happens
    May 10th, 2011 at 11:21pm
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