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  • vengefulXspirit

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    woohoo more please!
    May 10th, 2011 at 06:19pm
  • mistery gurl

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    oooh shit sorry thats me -.-,
    loved the chapter, but i think you mayhave got johnny and matt mixed up, but im not sure....
    cant wait for more :) maybe some one on one time with johhny is needed?
    May 10th, 2011 at 10:41am
  • KellShadows

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    I enjoy you writing in Shadows and Jasey's P.O.V xDD. Why do I have a feeling something is going to happen between them or something?? Any way's, love the story, hope you up-date again soon! =D
    May 10th, 2011 at 09:39am
  • Star Angel

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    more more more this is so good i love this a lot please update soon
    May 10th, 2011 at 09:16am
  • mistery gurl

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    so all the guys are crushing on her....
    May 10th, 2011 at 06:59am
  • mistery gurl

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    ooooooh jimmy fucked up!!!
    May 8th, 2011 at 10:00am
  • Star Angel

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    update this is so good i love this story i want no i need more please and thank you
    May 8th, 2011 at 08:12am
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    Ooh wonder what Johnnys gonna say when he finds out how all the guys r like obsessed with his daughter!!! Update soon :)
    May 8th, 2011 at 02:55am
  • mistery gurl

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    i dont think she should be moving in right now. i think she needs to meet with johnny, ask him to help pay rent for cathy, and once shes comfortable around him, then move in. because if she moves in now, and things go haywire, then itll turn ugly, but if they know each other better, then it wont be as bad..... UPDATE AGAIN SOOON!!!!
    May 5th, 2011 at 10:51am
  • Star Angel

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    oh my goodness update like now please and thank you
    May 5th, 2011 at 09:36am
  • AliCat4229

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    Yeah i am really she is going to live with her dad. Ease uptade soon
    May 5th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • flounder210

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    Awesome cant wait for the update!!
    May 5th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Ah I love this story can't wait for moree.
    May 5th, 2011 at 02:15am
  • AliCat4229

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    this is amazing please update soon!!!!!
    May 4th, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • AliCat4229

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    this is amazing please update soon!!!!!
    May 4th, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • fullmoon

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    I can't wait for the next update, when shes at his house. thanks for updating.
    May 4th, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • flounder210

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    I love your story!
    May 4th, 2011 at 04:53pm
  • mistery gurl

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    i like the change in johnny, and i hope cathy notices
    that johnny is taking on responsibility and wants to look after her
    May 4th, 2011 at 10:32am
  • fullmoon

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    Yay for the update. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I want to see how she does living with Johnny.
    May 4th, 2011 at 07:45am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it :)
    May 3rd, 2011 at 11:52am