Something I Could Hold Onto - Comments

That was an amazing chapter.

I loved the description and everything, and I agree with Cherry Road.
Brilliant :D

Oh my.

This chapter was much more interesting, to be completely honest.
Even though it has far less action and practically zero dialogue, but I love descriptions and getting into the character's head far more than any of those. =]

aww, that was... melancholy. poor frankie =(
and also poor kurt cobain, RIP. i wish i'd been old enough to appreciate their music before he died. but seeing as i was less than one, i wasn't really appreciating any music...

i really love this stoy, it's so different from all the other frerards on mibba, and very effective and well written too.
keep it up!

susie x

more soon please!

I. Love. It. More soon!!

tw!sted.l!fe.:

i don't even know what to say....seriously...i can't wait for more though!

... In a good way, right? :3 I'll try to have more tomorrow, but if not I'll definitely have two on Tuesday. Thank you for your comment!

love.your.hate:

God.Dammit.

Your good....

I love the opening of this... Not your usual boy meets boy situation... And i loved the fact that even thought they were confertable with each other... there was that little bit of awkwardness there...

Honestly, at the show... I did'nt expect Gerard to be there for some reason. Looking back you can see it coming, but while reading it i was genuinly surprised that he and Frank met up.

His mother...Is a nutcase...correction: a drunk nutcase. I love it.

Cannot wait to see where this goes....

Aww, thank you, Miss Cordee! I'm glad you like it!

I strongly suggest everyone go read her stuff; it's wonderful :]]

i don't even know what to say....seriously...i can't wait for more though!

God.Dammit.

Your good....

I love the opening of this... Not your usual boy meets boy situation... And i loved the fact that even thought they were confertable with each other... there was that little bit of awkwardness there...

Honestly, at the show... I did'nt expect Gerard to be there for some reason. Looking back you can see it coming, but while reading it i was genuinly surprised that he and Frank met up.

His mother...Is a nutcase...correction: a drunk nutcase. I love it.

Cannot wait to see where this goes....

=D

i <3 this story so much!

it's so original, and unlike some stuff i read i actually care about the characters =)
so yeah, please don't make frankie get killed by a rabid druggie. i would be sad. make him go live happily ever after with gerard instead =D

also, your description in the phonce call was very good, i really liked how it wasn't all just talking, it was things frank noticed as well. it made it much more vivid and interesting =)

well, hopefully that was marginally less bland and unhelpful XD

susie x

PixieSCREAM:

...I'm frustrated for Frank. :\ And duddde... There could be a druggie living in his place... That's... Well, it'd freak me out.
And his mom sounds like a totally bitch in this. Excuse my language. Or she's just strung out... Hm, maybe both?
This chapter was really good! I can't wait for the next one, so, soon?

edit: AHAHAHAAHAHA PAGE CLAIM! Whooo! I shall name it... hm. FREDRICK! THE ORANGE STEGOSAURUS!! Say hello to Fredrick.

-Waves-
Hi, Frederick! Orange stegosauruses are hella cool; you and I should be friends.
I think I'd be a little scared, as well :3 And your language is excused!
As for your strung-out/bitch dilemma... That should get answered later :]]

Sister Asleep:

ps. sorry, that was the blandest most unhelpful comment in the world. i'm suffering from comment writers block, i'll leave something better next update =D

Haha, no problem dear! Any comments are adored, especially since I know you're doing it just because you're nice :3

Trashing Hotel Rooms:

Yes, you must definitely NOT keep us hanging with the updates, missy!

Sorry, sorry, sorry! If I ever do that again, please spam my comment wall, my inbox, or this comment board. Feel completely free to bitch me out; I really don't mind! [As long as we're within reason ;3]

KranK:

WOOO! JOURNEY!! *cheers*
just a small town girl, livin' in a lonely world!

i LOVES that song..

... You're hella incredible :D
As is that song.
Don't deny the hair metal, kids; it'll help you grow up big and tall :3

Cherry Road:

Though this chapter wasn't the most exciting of them all, I loved how you introduced Frank's mother into the picture, and made her character this perpetually stoned mother who couldn't give two shits about Frank instead of the "Frank's mom is the coolest mother everrrrr." type of personality. It was a nice breather. Very Happy

Sorry it wasn't so thrilling :]] Then again, nothing really can be excited when you're laying in bed.
...
By yourself, that is :3

Thank you all for your comments and subscribing! I love getting feedback, and it's nice that you'll still comment without me forcing you to :3 Things should start to pick up after this, but updates may be coming slower; softball just started so I get home sort of late.

I'll still try my hardest! And I meant what I said to Miss Trashing Hotel Rooms -- if I ever go too long in your opinion without an update, please let me know :]]

Thank you again! [Long comment :\]

CHAPTER THREE
1. Easy," he grinned, "Toto has self esteem issues."
You just forgot the quotation marks.

CHAPTER SEVEN
1. Lyrics floated lazily around hiss skull, masking his thoughts in a haze of incoherency.
Obviously, only one 's'.

There was another that I remember seeing the first time I read it, but now I can't remember where it is. >< I think you forgot the word be somewhere near the beginning of a chapter, but I can't find it.

That added to the fact that I'm doing this in a rush means that you may have more typos that I didn't catch. =]
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Though this chapter wasn't the most exciting of them all, I loved how you introduced Frank's mother into the picture, and made her character this perpetually stoned mother who couldn't give two shits about Frank instead of the "Frank's mom is the coolest mother everrrrr." type of personality. It was a nice breather. :D

WOOO! JOURNEY!! *cheers*
just a small town girl, livin' in a lonely world!

i LOVES that song..

Frank's mom is fucked up... :|

i've been subscribed to this for a while and i had every intention of catching up a week or so ago and i failed at doing so. i've just read everything--some of the chapters again--and i've got to say i think this story is amazing! it's very well written, and it just flows nicely. definitely a fun twist on the meeting of gerard and frank, i rather like what you've got so far and i definitely cannot wait to see where you take this story! =]

i dont like the sound of his mum, but then again because he has to stay longer that means more time with gerard!

Amazing!
(PS: I pray Frank's mom isn't a crack whore.)

*new reader*

I like the story... :D
update when you can!

Yes, you must definitely NOT keep us hanging with the updates, missy!

Druggie in his apartment. Not a good thing.
I agree with PixieSCREAM - his mom sounds like a bitch.

...I'm frustrated for Frank. :\ And duddde... There could be a druggie living in his place... That's... Well, it'd freak me out.
And his mom sounds like a totally bitch in this. Excuse my language. Or she's just strung out... Hm, maybe both?
This chapter was really good! I can't wait for the next one, so, soon?

edit: AHAHAHAAHAHA PAGE CLAIM! Whooo! I shall name it... hm. FREDRICK! THE ORANGE STEGOSAURUS!! Say hello to Fredrick.

I adore it and my dedication
I haven;t been able to go on the computer since a few chapters ago and it was killing me
xx

awww cute