Without a Doubt - Comments

The difference between the loves: sex.

Can't wait for the story part! I'm always eager to read original fiction!

Wow,
that was really good.
You gave alot detailed but not over the top were it ruined the story.
I agree with ^^ you just need to fix that. Other then that everything is good.
For this just being intro it was really good, can't say I'm hook but I will be reading more :)

. . .nobody ever says who they is so how. . .

Improper grammar D:. If you were to read that out loud, it sounds really... wrong.

Other than that, this is really really good. It makes me want to read more, you really drew me in by talking about love, and the last sentance really did it.

I want to know how the story goes on now D:

May I just say, your writing is brilliant. I wasn't excepting so much amazing vocabulary and sentence structure. You've used words in that prologue that I'm not even sure I've ever heard. :O

I think this story could go amazingly far, I can feel that it's going to be amazing. A suggestion though, would be to change your layout. I think it's a kind of turn off to the story, which it shouldn't be because this is so dang beautiful. <3

Great job so far. (: