Set Fire to Rain - Comments

Sorry, but this is driving me nuts. ***follow*** with an 'o' not an 'a'.

Chapter 27. Again, how do you explain Umbitch?

Narcissa being skilled in Occlumency is quite good. I've never thought of, or read that one before. Very creative.

Dumbledore admonished Reagan's attempts to be a better person? He scolded her?

Legitimacy can stand for many things, including whether or not someone is a bastard child. Legilimency is the opposite, in some ways, of Occlumency.

If Reagan can do wandless magic, why can't she free herself of her shackles?

You suddenly changed and shortened Reagan's name into Regan.

I hate to burst your Patronus theory, but what about Umbridge?

I'm a little surprised about the about-face Reagan's attitude immediately took when she realized that Voldemort was willing to kill anyone in his way, including his own followers. After all, Karkaroff was only one of many. I'm also a little skeptical of the immediate turn in attitude toward her brother and the Trio. And theirs of her.

I'm a little surprised about the about-face Reagan's attitude immediately took when she realized that Voldemort was willing to kill anyone in his way, including his own followers. After all, Karkaroff was only one of many. I'm also a little skeptical of the immediate turn in attitude toward her brother and the Trio. And theirs of her.

I'm a little surprised about the about-face Reagan's attitude immediately took when she realized that Voldemort was willing to kill anyone in his way, including his own followers. After all, Karkaroff was only one of many. I'm also a little skeptical of the immediate turn in attitude toward her brother and the Trio. And theirs of her.

Okay, this was downright BRILLIANT. And I'm off to start the sequel now.

I don't know why I'm just coming across this, but damn I'm excited to read it AND the sequel!

I just started reading this and in chapter 12 you are talking about dueling with Hufflepuffs and you mention how they are smart and in blue robes. I think you mean Ravenclaws

I've just now started to read this story and I love it! But I wanted to point out that in chapter 4 you said she had blue eyes but Harry has green eyes. and you said that they have the exact same eyes....

I've just now started to read this story and I love it! But I wanted to point out that in chapter 4 you said she had blue eyes but Harry has green eyes. and you said that they have the exact same eyes....

Purely phenomenal. Never has a story that had the original character connected with both Harry and Draco been pulled off so seemlessly and I'm excited to see how this next one goes. :)

WOW! AMAZING AND THANK GOD THERES A SEQUEL! I loved this last chapter, it was incredible. I love how you tied it in perfectly with the books/films and I couldn't stop reading it:) Your own storyline was a good twist and made it very interesting to read and guess what was coming next. *loud and long applause*