if i weren't sitting next to my corny husband i would be crying....I was so wrong, this one was definitely my favorite chapter, they had both been waiting so long to kiss and it finally happened because they were both ready. and then when they just sat there and talked about their feelings for each other it just made me want to smack my boyfriend (not my husband who is just really my friend) this was a chapter that made Shinya look so caring and sensitive....i definitely want to see what happens when they make love but not in a pervert kind of way lol.....
your writing has truly shown it's...i don't even know words to describe this with this was your greatest chapter in my favorite story of yours....Keep up the good work Liz :)
This latest chapter is absolutely adorable and I love it. Very happy, a big, but nice, change from recent chapters. c: Favorite line of the chapter - "You could give her a bag of Miyu’s poop and she will be happy with it." I busted out laughing at that bit, honest. I wish you luck in writing the next chapter~
I have been reading your story from chapter one and I have this to say: I LOVE IT! The way you word your story paints a picture into my mind like I'm actually Tori, Brandon or a member of Dir En Grey! I also love how I also feel the emotions that comes with each individual character! Keep The Awesome Job Up!
That is THE MOST ROMANTIC THING THAT A BOY COULD EVER DO!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't breathe out of pure excitement :) I wanna cry laugh jump around scream all at the same time..! This is my new favourite chapter :)
Awesome update! You're so good at writing :) you've improved a lot in such a short time! I can't wait to read 23 and see how you're getting shinya and tori back together :p I'm sure it will be interesting, to say the least x) good luck!!
I couldn't stop reading it, don't make Shinya and Tori suffer so much! anyway great story,love it that the chapters are so long, can't wait for the next one :D
Lol hey fancy meeting you here…even if it's a filler it's still awesome but you put “Chapter 23” instead of Chapter 22 just thought that I would point that out :)