Great updates! I'm sorry I didn't read them sooner! I didn't know you updated :p I love how the story is going :) I think Alex and Tori should date-It would be cute and possibly make for a love triangle if Shinya gets back in the picture :p He seems like a good guy :) Well done! I can't wait to read more! I'm working on updating my own story as well, but I'm sure you'll beat me x)
Alex is hilarious!!!! I like him very much and he was right about that conversation between girls.…:) great chapter and I loved when he leaned out of the car to barf!! Dangerous but funny :)
I didn't even know you'd updated more of it! I'm loving this more and more and I cannot wait to read more!! I don't want tori to go back home >_< I want shinya to kidnap her!!! They're cute together :) I can't wait for their relationship to develop! And I like her brother much more now that he isn't a douchebag :p keep on writing!!! You're amazing :) you're so good at detail, plot, and sucking me into the story :p don't give up!!!
Ohhh man I'd of left that hell of a house asap while they were asleep, and I wouldn't be going back I'd be wanting one of the guys to come get me and my dog lol, great update yet again!! Can't wait for more.
Phew your chapters are long but I still love them…she doesn't even know who she's with yet and the burglary scene was kind of scary but I love every second of it!!!!!!