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  • OctoberA7X

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    Aw man!!!! So close :,( but I am so proud that she finally got on stage and sang her heart out :)
    May 17th, 2011 at 11:55pm
  • xoxdiebearxox

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    Great updates! I'm sorry I didn't read them sooner! I didn't know you updated :p I love how the story is going :) I think Alex and Tori should date-It would be cute and possibly make for a love triangle if Shinya gets back in the picture :p He seems like a good guy :) Well done! I can't wait to read more! I'm working on updating my own story as well, but I'm sure you'll beat me x)
    May 17th, 2011 at 04:57pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    Alex is hilarious!!!! I like him very much and he was right about that conversation between girls.…:) great chapter and I loved when he leaned out of the car to barf!! Dangerous but funny :)
    May 17th, 2011 at 01:31pm
  • Kiss_Me_Cryptic

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    Awesomeness!! funny thing is I'm listening to them right now too!!! Haha
    May 17th, 2011 at 05:49am
  • OctoberA7X

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    That was really great and even though it was sad I loved the accident scene!!!! Really great keep it updated!!!! :)
    May 12th, 2011 at 12:03am
  • Kiss_Me_Cryptic

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    T-T how sad yet how stupid but that's how kids are sadly. Great Update!!
    May 11th, 2011 at 05:45am
  • xoxdiebearxox

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    I didn't even know you'd updated more of it! I'm loving this more and more and I cannot wait to read more!! I don't want tori to go back home >_< I want shinya to kidnap her!!! They're cute together :) I can't wait for their relationship to develop! And I like her brother much more now that he isn't a douchebag :p keep on writing!!! You're amazing :) you're so good at detail, plot, and sucking me into the story :p don't give up!!!
    May 9th, 2011 at 05:20am
  • Kiss_Me_Cryptic

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    Ohhh man I'd of left that hell of a house asap while they were asleep, and I wouldn't be going back I'd be wanting one of the guys to come get me and my dog lol, great update yet again!! Can't wait for more.
    May 7th, 2011 at 06:45am
  • ohhnoosui

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    Whoa such emotion filled writing. Cry to the point that my nose is stuffy. It was amazingly awesome so far and I can't wait til the next one
    May 7th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • Kiss_Me_Cryptic

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    Ur welcome for the comment! I loved the update! This story is great the guys are great too! Can't wait for more to come!
    May 6th, 2011 at 11:32pm
  • Kiss_Me_Cryptic

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    Amazing story!! More please! Great detail!
    May 6th, 2011 at 11:11pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    I would have just beat my parents with a stick…grabbed my dog and ran like hell :)
    May 6th, 2011 at 05:46pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    Phew your chapters are long but I still love them…she doesn't even know who she's with yet and the burglary scene was kind of scary but I love every second of it!!!!!!
    May 4th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • OctoberA7X

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    Ha comment virginity stolen!!! (Evil laugh) okay lets get to business…LOVES IT :)
    May 3rd, 2011 at 04:21am