The One I Love - Comments

haahha i love that pic so much!

behind brian where matt is standing in the pic...i'm sure there is a pic of matt's face somewhere. haha i never knew brian what near him.

As for the chapter itself, you did a great job. i loved it, everything went smoothly...though i don't think it will last. brian isn't really showing that he cares about who finds out anymore, he's openly kissing her and now they are going to have sex on the beach. they're going to get caught in the act one of these times

loved it! and Zacks right Brian needs to dump Michelle already..she's just using him its obvious to everyone including Jimmy that Harlows a better match for him

ahh cant wait for more!!
nd omg he does look innocent! lol thats great

poor girl, brian better hurry the hell up and just end things with michelle, she's no good for him.

he better hurry up and get rid of michelle aye and that pic of hom is so cute xD
Cant wait for the next update

loved that chapter, im am inlove with this story its AMAZING!! :D

lovee it! nd awww poor Harlow!!
also id love to party with Brian helllll yeaaa!

I love u so fucking much! Luv the update it's beautiful :') xoxoxox

aww cute she ran to zack! loved it cant wait for more!

i love this story can't wait for the next update

i bet michelle is starting to get jealous and she wants to show everyone that Brian's 'belongs' to her. really from what zack said i think jim might have talked to him too or something. and i would love to go out drinking with brian...but that may just get me locked up lol

Love the update! Please more soon!

i really loved this update. seeing jimmy in a dream had to make brian feel much better and on top of that he got to see how his life could be like if he wasn't with michelle...i think he should leave her

Aww loved the updates i really loved Brian dream :) it was good how Jimmy was there and how he showed him his future.
Loved the pic of Jimmy and Brian i hell Miss Jimmy D:
Update soon please

damn it you made me cry...i miss Jimmy so much...now i have tears running down my face and can hradly see the screeen so if this is alw wierd and abadly typed with lerors thats why lol...but i lvoed it!

Awe Jimmy was in it! I miss stories that totally have Jimmy in them, it's just so hard to hear of the band without Jimmy still. Anyways great update! Can't wait for more!

i loved this chapter nd the pic at the end made me cry.

oh shizz!!! O: matty boy *shakes head*
cant wait for more!

Ah you gotta update again soon! This story is just fantastic! When I finished this chapter and seen how short it was I seriously almost yelled out "What! No! I need more!!" so please please please update again soon!