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  • MamaZ

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    i so called it! but i'm glad that matt isn't made at her
    May 15th, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • MamaZ

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    Chapter 9: Wrong move on Brian's part to kiss her on the jombo screen. i bet one of the guys...or val was watching the game at home and saw them
    May 15th, 2011 at 10:21pm
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    Chapter 5: OMFG!!! how the hell can you do that?! they were great at being 'gay'. haha synacky...if he only knew. okay i'm off the read the other chapters now
    May 15th, 2011 at 10:02pm
  • RandaRue22

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    ha some is very loyal to their cigarette brand. I can't wait for more updates, this story is awesome!
    May 15th, 2011 at 08:47pm
  • Through-the-Night

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    I have a feeling that somebody's gonna catch them :) Let the drama begin.
    May 15th, 2011 at 08:08pm
  • Through-the-Night

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    I like the last line where Brian says he feels like he's cheating on Harlow. That's really sweet, and the background before he actually met her was nice.
    May 15th, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • foREVer Synyster

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    awh loved the update :) it was so sweet!
    May 15th, 2011 at 04:32pm
  • StallionDucky

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    loved it! cant wait for more!
    May 15th, 2011 at 04:25am
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    oh no brian better be carefull xD
    Cant wait for the next update
    May 15th, 2011 at 01:58am
  • xMy Heart Is A Fistx

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    Hahahah XD i call my friend Zack Zack Attack! i do like this story but you think brian would have a little more control XP cant wait for an update!
    May 14th, 2011 at 09:34pm
  • cat-vengeance

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    cant wait to see what matt thinks he knows lol
    May 14th, 2011 at 09:03pm
  • KellShadows

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    <333 love the story. I hope you up-date again soon! I can't wait to see what happen"s next! =D
    May 14th, 2011 at 07:50pm
  • RandaRue22

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    Ooo he's getting daring with Michelle being right there. I can't wait for more of this story, its great and it's written so nicely.
    May 14th, 2011 at 07:33pm
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    bad brian xD
    defently sexy pic to any pic of him is sexy his just a sexy god xD
    Cant wait for the next update
    May 14th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • cat-vengeance

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    totally love this! i cant wait to see what happens if everyone else finds out lol
    May 14th, 2011 at 01:25am
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    loved that chapter and that pic of him was sexy xD i might get to see them live in 3 month cant wait xD
    May 13th, 2011 at 10:56am
  • to.the.end

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    this is so good :) can't wait to see what happens....
    May 13th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • cat-vengeance

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    oh zack lolz
    May 13th, 2011 at 03:58am
  • TexasChainsawGirl

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    Hehe update!!! Haha I loved the snyacky and when zackys like fuck yea were holdin hands! Haha
    May 13th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • StallionDucky

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    ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahhahahah-pauses for breath- hahahahahahahahahahahaha....zack and brian pretending to be gay! lol love it! cant wati for more!
    May 13th, 2011 at 02:46am