Oh my lord I love your story. It makes my heart swell and my face scrunch up and I crack up and I feel like squeezing the life outta y'all for your amazing story. But then again I don't wanna do that cuz then y'all would be dead and wouldn't be able to write anymore. I love the pictures that you put in the chapters, it makes me want to make out with the screen even before I have read the amazing literature. I like on the summary page how you guys are so creative with the way you tell us that it is in one person's or the other's pov. I like how awkward you get with the smut afterwards and it isn't written bad at all, I enjoy it. We get the point of the heated stuff. I love your story, I just love it! ^-^