Stray - Comments

Ooo I love that bike! =D I like action stories but you should definitely include romance, and fluff if called for. I'm impressed Darren made it to her house in that state! I can't wait to hear his explanation(read: your BS) hahahhaha =) Good updates btw!

I had a feeling you would find a way to stall it, you ;). Oh, and I definitely like the story turn you made. I wasn't sure what more you could have done with the stalker romance (even though I did like that idea too). Now I'm just waiting on what the hell the Darren's big, juicy secret is :3. Can't you feel my excitement :D? I also like how she's slightly getting along with him. Keep up the good work, Yuffs. Can I call you Yuffs? Too bad, I am ;).
Update when you can! <3

Please keep on going!! This story is amazing!

Wow! I'm really really loving this!! Darren seems absolutely amazing. He seems like he's had a hard life... I wish Annie would be a little nicer to him but I suppose it's understandable that she's a bit mean seeing as he's slightly stalking her... But still. ABSOLUTELY LOVING IT. *clicks subscribe*

I love your story please update more!! =D

Oh, hell no if you think your dodging this topic. I'm glad to say that the story is getting very interesting. From the beginning, I knew Darren had some big secret that was going to be revealed at some point; I can't wait to know what it actually is now. I'm also happy to see that you won't be focusing in on just one of your stories, but are varying updated on them all. Keep up the great work, Yuffie (:
Update when you can! <3

I love it!! please update more =D

A Chevy Impala.
You are a legend. :P
I'm really enjoying watching this story unfold. :)
Very well written.
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yes

Wow...Darren is quite the character. I love him to be perfectly honest. I love the weird, smart guys. Personally I find him way more appealing than any dumb ass jock ever could be. It is nice that it would appear he isn't viewing her in a romantic way. I like how he is just trying to be friends in a strange way. Your stories are always well crafted when it comes to building up the relationships between characters. It really is amazing.

This chapter had me giggling like a retard repeatedly. There is something about mentally trying to picture some random guy showing up in your house, making you hot chocolate, and helping you with calculus that I just find hysterical. Sometimes I wish someone would be kind enough to help me with homework...*glances around room desperately looking for attractive, intelligent male*...sadly I'm not that lucky.

Anyway I love this story. I will be waiting patiently for another update!

Awsomeness:) Can't wait for the next update

Chapter 1 - the odds did not [pointing] in my favor. -- might wanna fix that. :)

I can't believe how much I love this already. This, especially the 1st chapter, reminded me that for me, the greatest thing in the world is to give someone the will to live. Darren's creepiness makes me question that thought though, and I love it.

I was like, "whut??" in the second chapter. It just seemed so strange that he would just break in like that. But the third chapter just made me accept that this is a funny story in its own way. Love this: If he'd wanted to murder me in my sleep and throw my body in a lake, he would've done so by now.

“Low d/dx high, minus high d/dx low, over bottom squared, and away we go!” He grinned at me when I snickered at his stupid rhyme. -- Ohmygod. I think I fell inlove with Darren because of this. Intelligent guys are my weakness. I can't wait to know more about the guy. I'm sure his back story will be heart-wrenching but will also have some kind of twist that only you can put.

I can't wait for an update! :D

Hot and smart, I like Darren, haha.

I wasn't sure at first if i would like this story or not but so far, its pretty good. I never met a dog that steals guns though, i guess i need to look harder

Oh my God... I LOVE Darren! He's so funny and he just pops up like he belongs in her house. He's not guilty or anything!

I think this is even good enough for me to subscribe. :)

Awesome!

This just keeps getting better and better:)

Ah, sorry for the double comment.

Well, look who's on the verge of updating :D! Wow, this story's coming along pretty great. It's unusual how quick Annie is getting used to Darren, but then again, I kinda like it that way. I'm really looking forward to learning more about Darren. Oh, and you tie in the story pretty nicely. I like how you added in that only Annie and her uncle know where to step on the porch stairs, so Annie knew that Darren was at her house by the broken stair (:. If I was in Annie's shoes, I'd find Darren insanely creepy, but his calm attitude would reassure me that he's safe. Attempting suicide, breaking and entering Annie's house, stalking her...smooth Darren (;
Haha, love the story so far!
Update when you can! <3

Well, look who's on the verge of updating :D! Wow, this story's coming along pretty great. It's unusual how quick Annie is getting used to Darren, but then again, I kinda like it that way. I'm really looking forward to learning more about Darren. Oh, and you tie in the story pretty nicely. I like how you added in that only Annie and her uncle know where to step on the porch stairs, so Annie knew that Darren was at her house by the broken stair (:. If I was in Annie's shoes, I'd find Darren insanely creepy, but his calm attitude would reassure me that he's safe. Attempting suicide, breaking and entering a Annie's house, stalking her...smooth Darren (;
Haha, love the story so far!
Update when you can! <3