June 10th, 2011 at 10:27am
Stray - Comments
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I love this last chapter. :)June 9th, 2011 at 05:09pm
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I wish there was a like button on here... I'd like the chapter(:June 9th, 2011 at 03:29am
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I REALLY like where this story is going. I really enjoy this story :3 Why does he give her migranes? He's not that bad a guy she's just got an awful temper! :LJune 8th, 2011 at 06:57pm
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I freaking love this ! I can't wait for an update !!June 8th, 2011 at 07:30am
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:3 hes gunna live with her! ahahah yay, shinanagins! :pJune 8th, 2011 at 06:35am -
Haha! I wanna be really rude and demand more because if this was a book I'd read it in one sitting and waiting for updates is torture! But I won't haha =) This was a good update, though I'm hoping Darren's motivation will be revealed soon. I'm sure boredom factored in but it can't be just that can it?June 4th, 2011 at 01:09am
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I love Darren but at the same time he is such a idiot.
Awesome.June 3rd, 2011 at 03:47pm -
I am enjoying reading this as much as you are enjoying writing it. :)
Keep the updates coming!
:P
♥June 3rd, 2011 at 03:36am -
Wow! I really liked that update! I still feel like I don't really know Darren though! I would really like to learn more about him! And why does she keep resisting him? He sounds amazing. :PJune 2nd, 2011 at 10:22pm
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Fantastic! This story is great and so original! Keep it up!June 2nd, 2011 at 04:23am
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First things first, I found only one little mistake, but I think I recall you saying you wanted the story spotless ;)
“Because stalking underage girls is such a blast,” I said, going thick with he sarcasm. I think that was meant to be 'the' (:
This story is turning out so good! I love Darren and Annie's humorous bickering! Oh, and thank you for finally confirming their age. He's twenty-one, huh? I would want to date a guy who was a few years older than me if I was Annie *wink, wink* Haha!
I'm actually glad that you're not piling on personal information about Darren, or even Annie, just yet. It's good to get to know the characters' personalities and let the information spread out over the future chapters; It keeps me more on edge.
Darren's straight-forward attitude is amusing. I keep forgetting that this guy actually tried to kill himself until you actually bring it up in the story again.
Maybe I forgot, but did you ever mention what happened to Annie's parents? I'm not sure you ever got to it, but I'm pretty interested on knowing a little about them.
Those are my thoughts! Oh, and I'm glad you're enjoying writing this story as much as we love reading it!
Update when you can! <3June 2nd, 2011 at 04:10am -
OH MY GAWD! I just LOVE Darren=DJune 2nd, 2011 at 04:07am
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I am definitely enjoying this. I love that she's studying her a.p. biology. I just decided before I read this chapter that I'm going to totally b.s. my ap bio final tomorrow. [Well, maybe no totally...I'm actually read good at it...and am going to cram all of tomorrow.] XD Thank you for the wonderful distraction!June 2nd, 2011 at 03:55am
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Hahaha,
Finally some answers. :)
Hopefully.
I thought her reaction to him being almost naked was so funny. :P
I'm sorry you are sick, get better soon!!
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Oh damn girl we better get some updates soon! I love that cliffhanger but at the same time ITS SO FRUSTRATING! It's great over all. Loving it!June 1st, 2011 at 11:27pm
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Oh damn girl we better get some updates soon! I love that cliffhanger but at the same time ITS SO FRUSTRATING! It's great over all. Loving it!June 1st, 2011 at 11:27pm
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Aw, well I really hope you're feeling better. As fillerish as this chapter was, it was still kind of amusing. Annie's innocence to seeing Darren half-naked is hilarious. If you do end up making changes to this chapter (or any past/future chapters) let me know, alright? Plus, you said you were sick, I wouldn't expect you to whip up a crazy good chapter while you're in a bad state. ;)
Update when you can! <3June 1st, 2011 at 10:39pm -
kawasaki ninja. *drools* My favorite. :D <3yooou!June 1st, 2011 at 08:30pm
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Haha,
I knew you would work your magic and stall. :P
I agree with the above comment, keep it action-y, but have some romance fluffy stuff as needed. :)
I am really enjoying reading this and I am glad you are staying on top of your other stories as well. :D
♥June 1st, 2011 at 10:41am
I love her friends.
They remind me of some of my friends. XP
This story is turning out to be quite cute. :)
I wonder how long that will last? Lol.
I joke.
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