Stray - Comments

I'm already excited for the next chapter :D

<3 Clarissa

I like it.
The characters are well developed. It's witty has a bit of humor and enough description to creat images.
:) good job

I really like it =D

Awesome. I'm subscribing

Well, I liked the beginning I can tell you that! [: I'm not sure where you're going with this story though. It's probably going to be a confusing ride with secrets soon-to-be revealed. If you have a plan on how to go with this story, and if you enjoy writing it, I guess you could give this story a shot? I'm already liking Darren's and Annie's characters. If you're trying to perfect this story, I did find a mistake.

[ ]=mistake

*Couple paragraphs down from the beginning:

I tried to tell myself that this was the doing of the gods, that Jupiter was aligned [with the its] moon or something.

That's all I found though, so great job! Subscribing ;)
Update when you can! <3

Oh la la! I love this! Very interesing.

Love it! It's funny and interesting, more please? =)

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. :) I loved the first chapter of this :) had to giggle a little at her outburst at him and how tat seemed to fasinate him :) so now she's got herself a suicidal stalker...interesting :) Can't wait for more!

i really like this! <3 seems like it could go really good, keep posting!