Stray - Comments

I'm so glad Darren decided to laugh at Annie's anger towards him in stead of taking it to heart; I'd hate to see them all awkward with each other :P.

He took her first kiss :3! She knows, deep inside, that she doesn't mind that it was him ;). She'll come to her senses soon.

I'm interested in knowing where the hell he went, though :/. He better not be getting himself into trouble.

Haha, I just noticed that I was way off about him breaking the suicidal promise, no the "Don't touch me!" promise xD. I was so paranoid :x.

Update when you can! <3

That's funny that he kiss thing way the first thing you had written in the entire story and it didn't come to surface until chapter (11?) Great story. Darren just doesn't get 'no' does he? :)

Sorry!!! the *he in the last bit is referring to her Uncle walking in when Darren and Annie were talking. My bad!!! :)

Oh. My. Freaking. Gosh.

I read it when you went around recommending it, but then...I forgot to subscribe!!!! So I come back and start reading and freak out because, OMG I LOVE IT! How could I forget to subscribe?!!! I feel like a horrible fangirl of your stories now! D:

Anyway, there are a few things. I can't remember where, but it might be when her Uncle invites Darren to live with them, you accidentally put "jacked" for the "jacket" over his arm. Not really major, I just kind of noticed.

Aside from that, early on she mentioned her childhood obsession with princesses and dragons and princes and everything - I feel like I've been left out, because I didn't get into that stage until sometime in the last two years (well, the princesses part, I've always loved dragons and swooned about princes XD). And I'm almost eighteen now! Haha. And I started laughing at the last chapter you've got up because, when I SHOULD have been a princesses obsessed girl, Aladdin was my favorite movie. It's still one of my favorites, but I also like How To Train Your Dragon and Beauty and the Beast way up there XD

Enough of embarrassing myself though. I really love the story, am worried about all that's going on with Darren, love laughing at the fact that he walked in when Darren was talking to Annie and they had a mutual freak-out (haha! XD), and just overall love the stalker-ish Darren. Really.

Please update soon? For your obsessive fangirl? Haha :)

Asdkvadg. How did I not read this earlier?? This is absolutely wonderful! I seriously just read all of it in just one sitting, and I could not tear my eyes away. In the little clips of Darren talking about college, I just felt happy. You nailed that, dead on. Some teachers are weird as hell and give you extra credit for stuff like that. I love it.
And you've done well sculpting Darren into that flirtatious guy you can't help but kind of like despite his annoying, persistent, pestering, semi-creepy personality. He's got depth, and I adore it. His background is fantastic, and I just can't wait to see what else he's got up his sleeve.
You've also got me wondering about Annie, just what in her past she regrets so much, it may have just been one line but it caught my attention for sure. She's feisty, the entire part where she dumped her trash on her friend just made my day. She's got a fantastic personality. Also her reaction to Darren crawling in her house, soaked in blood was fantastic and believable. Not to mention I think I'd love to meet her uncle. He just sounds awesome.
Holy crap I will be anxiously awaiting the next installment of this. I love it. Lots and lots. Honestly it's become my favorite thing to read online just after one sitting. You are freaking amazing, you know that??

i just started reading this n i love it. and i do agree on you opinion about linkin park. i liked their old songs better, not it's all...blehhh

Oh lordy lou! I truely love your work;)

Don't you just love being kicked off the laptop for freaking facebook? -note sarcasm-
ahhhh i love it
he reminds me a bit of Toby from Pretty Little Liars
the pained eyes but still with a smirk
yepp, that's Toby

That. Is. Freaken. SO. CUTE!! :D

I haven't even read chapter 1 & I already like it :D
I'll post another comment once I've read the 12 or so chapters you have up

This was a really great chapter =) Again, I love how they interact! And DUDE! I LOVE ALADDIN! =D

Alright! I was never one to look into something pretty deeply, but something Darren said in this chapter jumped out to me. I have this whole philosophy about it going off in my head. So, I was begging to think to myself, "Is Darren ever going to attempt suicide again?" THEN, in this chapter, he asks Annie if she'll ever forgive someone that broke a promise to her. And I'm like, "Huh, that's a pretty random question. Maybe he made a promise to her that he's thinking of breaking?" After the chapter, I did a little investamagatin' (my ghetto version of "investigating" haha) and found out that in the first chapter, she tells Darren to promise her that he won't try to kill himself again. Even though he didn't exactly reply to her, it was kind of implied that he agreed. So now I'm all like, "HOLY CHIZZ NUGGETS! Maybe that's what he means!" I feel pretty confident about this :3.

Now, I'm not sure if I'm thinking too much about it or not. I probably am since there isn't that big of a reason for Darren to want to kill himself. I mean, he seems pretty content with everything right now. UNLESS, there's something he (more like you) didn't tell us yet ;)? I feel like some sort of spy, haha!

Either way, I liked the chapter. They're so cute ;3.
Update when you can! <3

This story is amazing!!! cant wait for more!! xD

I loved that chapter.
They are getting so close now! It's really cute. :P
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Creepy works for me though...

I mean evidently I enjoy stalkers :)
I loved the update!

*Sighs...* I hate when it's only one chapter... maybe I should just... not check every five minutes? Lol, I'm not that much of a creeper, but I have been on here a lot lately....Either way, more please?(: Let's get you on a role for this story too! I really like it. Almost as much as Superhero. So I guess this is my second favorite of yours?(:

yayayayayayyayayyayayayayya! :)

How cute <3

Why isn't there more!?!?

So once again i am in love with your writing and will be frequenting this comment area XD

I WAS going to say that chapter 10 was my favorite chapter, but i think the emotional and hilarious-ness of chapter 11 won me over. haha.

Anyways, now that i am reading 3 of your stories and am an impatient women i hope at least ONE of your stories will be updated enough to keep me satisfied. ^_^
great idea by the way, not unlike real life lol.