Stray - Comments

I love you. You know that, right?

Escpecially your psychotic babble in the chapter where you were sleep deprived, and arguing with yourself about winging the story. I burst into laughter and went in and babbled to my mother about it, and had her cracking a grin (and that's weird, 'cause I DEFINITELY didn't get my sense of humor from either of my parents...haha).

Anywho, I really like how Darren always sneaks kisses now, and how Annie just doesn't know how to take it. I think she's just in denial, y'know?

And just so you know, I SOOOO called the inspiration for Flynn's name. Mostly because I watched that movie like four times last week since I'm only borrowing it from my Grandma and don't own it. Haha. xD And also just so you know, Flynn effing scares the pee out of me. :)

Love this story, and can't wait for more!! :)

I love this story. Darren makes my day and I love how he gets away with anything by smiling.
Also, it is awesome to check my email and see an update for this story; it makes my day. =)

oh I was away in France but I came back to lots of chapters which made me very happy :) I wish Annie would just accept that she had feelings for him and would stop fighting him and being mean. She loves him. A few of those chapters made me cry my eyes out.

Aha, I love the random moments when Darren kisses Annie; she knows she likes it, too ;). I'm gonna like it even more when she comes to her senses and kisses him back.

Poor Darren; I cannot believe he went through all of that. And, oh my god, she's the only reason he wants to live D'x. </3

Okay, Flynn officially scares me. When he first introduced himself, he seemed alright, but then he just got fuckin' creepy o_o.

I still need to know why "they," whoever they are, wanted to kill Darren :S.

Darren oh Darren I wanted to hug him so bad when he was at the dinner table
It's like impossible to hold a grudge against this kid

In other news, I love Young Justice! Robin is awesome!!
Ahaha why 3 years?

makes me wish that i liked pancakes.

its amazing

I'm really lovin' on this story. The idea for it is so unique! I haven't read anything like it. I can't wait for another update!

Awwwh Darren is Kickass!

I'm waaaay too in love with this.

You have the most adorable authors notes I have ever read. XD
I loved that chapter, I really want to know what is going on with Darren!
Haha. Good luck with trying to come up with some answers. ;)
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(Oh my god, I love you're author's notes xD)

I looove good mysteries! There's all these questions flying from left to right:
- Where the hell's Darren?
- What did he do to have those people out to kill him?
- What was he going to say to Annie before the unknown kidnapper interrupted him? (Was he going to say he loves her? :3)

Awh, Cece (I'm just going to call her that 'cause I forgot how to spell her full name, aha ;x) is so cute! She also seems really sweet and innocent, haha :).

Update wh-you know what? No, I'm sick of always saying "Update when you can! <3" Just...do what you wanna do, lmao.

Oh my god! You have to update like soon please please please please please
Oh god no darren

One part should be "chunk" instead of "chuck" in the recent chapter, like the above said. When she's talking about learning her vocabulary and a good 'chunk' of the rest. You put 'chuck' there. Haha.

There's also the part where she asks him what he's doing, before he kisses her, I think, and you forgot the ending quotation marks.

All in all, though, I am freaking obsessed. I love this. Sososososo much. I can't even describe how addicting this one is!!! Since I've already read TGL before, it's not QUITE as addicting (though the changes still make it really addicting, too). I love all your stories, jeez.

Update soon?

asldkgasdfhg. Dude. I love you. So so much. This is so my favorite story online. Darren's one of those guys I feel like I should hate, despise, avoid, but he's just so darn amusing I can't help but be completely engrossed in the very concept of his character. I do pity Annie, though, having her first kiss stolen like that.
I've been looking for it and I can't find it right now, but somewhere you put "chuck" instead of "chunk."
Er. You've got me anxiously awaiting your next update. The last thing he said about assuming he's probably dead actually had me a little on edge. Obviously he's got some problems back where he's from, and the fact he's going to meet someone probably is not a good thing. Dear lord, Yuffie. You're a genius. You have no idea how much I adore this story. (And her uncle just sounds adorable.) Sorry I just got around to reading this, I've been in Charleston for the past few days. But I was so glad to see this was updated when I got home!

Isn't it funny that way, when one thought triggers the event of a whole story? I love that! :) Anyway, I can see why this chapter was inspiring, it was so cute.
I. Love. Darren. He's absolutely adorable :3

I freaking Iove this story!
Ahahahaha he stole kisses that's kind of cute in a twisted way
Ahhhhhh I hope you update this soon

Awh, that's so cute <3

I'm guessing by the awesome college story in chapter 12 that you read MLIA

I really have enjoyed reading this, and some parts even made me laugh! I love the characters, you've written this really well :) I can't wait to read another chapter :)