I Never Told You What I Do For a Living - Comments

Comment swap! I'm not to keen on these types of stories, so I can't say that I would continue. You do have a nice writing style, although, when writing 'to' or 'too', don't put the number 2. That was slightly irritating. It also seems to jump a little, but that is something we all struggle with. It was good, though, so keep writing!

Okay, haha. I am sorry about my two previous comments. I am new to comment swap. But I loved your story. I think I remember reading this when I first joined, but re-read it anyway. This has got to be one of my favourite my chemical romance fan fictions, so I am definitely going to read the sequel.

Hey I read this, and omg, it was awesome. I love MCR :) I found this through comment swap haha *sorry my last comment didn't seem to work out*But, I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel.

Hey I read this, and omg, it was awesome. I love MCR :) I found this through comment swap haha

I can't believe it's over...hurry and post the sequel! I'm so excited. This is going to be interesting how Gerard manages to get out of jail.

oooh i can't wait to read what happens next
its really, kinda sad that Jaydee still loves him, even after everything. Yeah, maybe it was his mind, but y'know he shouldn't have tried to hurt Jaydee

He just ha to go to jail. Awh, Gerard I hope he's okay. I can't imagine how the sequel is going to play out. Crazy. <3

Oh gosh, whoa, Frankie called the police, I hope he lives! :) I love this so much, such an emotional roller coaster

I really hope this doesn't get suspended. I'm anxious for the next chapter to get out. It got reported right at the good part. D: I hope Jaydee is okay. Gerard is a crazy little fuck.

Oh no! Not Frankie! Shit, shit, I hope he's okay, but I know I'm asking a lot

Oh my gosh, no, not Frankie. Dammit he's my favorite xD and this plan seemed like it was going to play out so well. You have to update this now. I'm too excited.

Holy fuck is the only thing I keep repeating while reading the end of the last chapter, I'm so scared and excited and ugh I can't wait until the next update! I love this!

Awh no. I can already tell something bad is about to happen. Really excited though. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm so excited for the next one!

I don't usually like third person stories but this is great! ... Even if there are quite a few typos xD

Oh geez i wonder how it's all go down

Awww she's leaving

I can't believe she's leaving. The only thing I'm worried about is that Gerard would get pissed and kill Frank out of anger, or maybe even Mikey. I wouldn't put it past him. Gerard's crazy and adorable in this. xD :}
Loved the update.

Holy mother of pearl there's a baby Gerard coming!

holy fudge! its getting really really intense!