I Never Told You What I Do For a Living - Comments

Awh how cute. A baybee. :]] I'm so excited for this to continue. Thanks for updating :D

This is getting intense and I love it. The plot is building up to something huge, I can tell.

Ugh, I cant wait to see what happens next! this story is awesome

The second update was so goood I'm in suspense to see what happens

Once again poor Mikey!

I just started reading this and HOLY FUCK it's so intense! I loved the lastest chapter, oh my God, Gee is fucking nuts! I love your story, it's great!!

Lol, sounds so....dirty! I like it! keep updating please!!

love this story! and yes continue with the sex scenes ;) *subscribes*

Beautiful update. I kind of want Mikey to get a little roughed up though. ;D

Lol I just commented but I will cry if he kills Mikey ='(

I love how twisted this is I can't stop reading it!

Well that was sexy. You need more chapters like this, ahaha.

Oh god the beginning scared me. I was like WHHAT?!
but I'm glad things are going to work out for them (;

OKAY, I'm back.

Chapter Four:
Oh god, poor Gerard. :(

Chapter Five:
He better not hurt her. She seems too nice. Jaydee needs to stay in line and stop pissing him off. xD

Chapter Six:
GERARD. CALM. YOUR. TITS. Jaydee is just being all sweet and innocent and he's fucking screaming at her xD
And oh my goddd, I knew she would open it. Still, I hope she says yes in the next couple chapters . . . She's going to die if she doesn't. :|

Chapter Seven:
Oh shit. It's about to go down.

Chapter Eight:
Awh, I was expecting him to just torture her or something. This was much sweeter though. I'm happy for them. :)

Chapter Nine:
Mikey knew this whole time? Poor kid. That sounds traumatizing. :(

Chapter Ten:
Oh my god update update UPDATE. I can't wait for the next chapter holy crap I'm excited. This story is too good. I'm too anxious to see what happens next. :]

--long ass comment over--

Chapter Seven:

I'm a sick fuck and I just love murder and crime and blood and shit like that. I was excited ever since I read the description. Gerard as a murderer is just auhfrsuh. It's sad, it's sick, but you gotta admit it's damn attractive. ;D

I'm typing this as I read, and since there's a lot of chapters, I'll go chapter by chapter with my thoughts. Prepare for a long ass comment.

Chapter One:
Love it. Love it. Starting out with murder is the best and I love how subtle you made it, leaving some things for the imagination. Feel bad for all the girls he had to kill though. They shouldn't cheat on him, stupid people! :)

Chapter Two:
Holy crap I'm excited. I can't wait to see the trouble she gets into. Gerard needs to calm the eff down with his temper xD Is this the same Mariah from your other story?

Chapitre Trois: (Chapter three in francais~)
Awh, Mikey Mouse. That's cute. It's weird how Gerard goes from happy to angry within seconds. I don't want to call it bipolar but he just . . . has a short temper. That's cute. Even cuter that he has such an evil mind but soft outer core. Kind of. You know what I mean. -dismissive hand wave-
I'm kind of scared for Jaydee. And what Frank and Mikey are going to do to Gerard. Poor Mikey, caught in the middle of it all.

Aaaand, here is where I have to stop because I have a couple chores I need to do, but I'll be back and finish commenting on the rest of the chapters. :)
Of course, subscribed~

This is really good. I'm in my room, like it's all dark and around midnight. My stomach is freaking out haha. But yeah, awesome :)

The tension!:O

Oh damn she finds Gerards things but he totally had it coming yelling at her like that...

I love the story lovely and more frequent updates please!! ^_^

The suspense is literally killing me. I really want to see what happens to Jaydee and if Gerard finds out :o I can't wait. Please update soon :)

I'm checking this story every day to see if you updated >.< I LOVE it :D Please have mercy on me and update soon ;)