Keeping His Secret - Comments

I love this story, I dont think I have ever read one with this plot x)
I love how slade is always teasing daniel and I hope he starts accepting he's gay soon xP
hope you update soon and .. yeah thats it :D

Okay so I hadn't been able to read the last chapter so when i did i was like :O whoa didn't see that coming. But I should have because that's where you're going with this story
Anywho! Good chapter, well written, & I see no typos. Overall, good good. I wanna know more about Slade's jail time! In my head I'm going through possible scenarios & crimes but I wanna know!!
I hope you update soon, I like this story. It has a good plot going .

When I read the first part of the chapter, and it said that both of their hair was wet, I thought they had shower sex. But alas, they didn't. And I know, that Slade will keep his promise, and him and Danny will 'do it'. Cause Slade is just that type of guy. Man, Slade, tell Danny about why you went to prison! Gaah! Anyways, awesome update and I'm totally syked for the next one:)

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man i wanted more! *pout*
hope you update soon!!!!

i loved it. i think you did a really good job at that.
i was slightly upset when you ended it just there but it was good adn i never thought of stip go fish before...hmmmmmmmmm

I don't really read slashes anymore, like I used to, but that was really well done (the 'sex' scene). It wasn't as descriptive as one part of the story that I liked, but I still loved it over all. I couldn’t describe in that moment what I felt. It was surreal. It was foreign. It was absolutely amazing. Slade’s lips moved with mine as we kissed, the heat from our bodies mixing together. I nipped at his bottom lip playfully.

He moaned softly, licking my bottom lip. I gasped, opening my mouth and letting him in. His tongue tangoed with mine. It felt like Slade’s lips were a magnetic, I felt like I was being pulled to him. He was addicting. He tasted of American burger, but that added all the more to the effect. I loved that. You did very well on that.

I did indeed read only the last chapter, but I think I'll try the whole thing. It seems that interesting to do. I usually only do that to slash stories nowadays. xD

Anyway, keep it up, okay? I'll sub since I want to. ~

gyaaahhh scary scary scary rape alert alarm in head going off...this is a very good story. but AHHHH SCARYSCARYSCARYRAPEALERTRAPEALERTRAPEALERT yeesh

awwwwwwwww why'd you leave it there!?!?!?!??!?!

I love Slade too. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

i loved. and i do love slade too.

I love Slade, too

Hmm, Slade is awesome. Haha. I really like the suspense in this. I also like the way you describe the feelings that Danny has and what he sees and everything. Absolutly wonderful. I can't wait for the next update. :)

It's painfully strange how entrancing this story is.
I love it.

still intrigued so still here.
curious to see what's going to happen

*waves* hi!
i'm just gonna wait here for another update because you've got me hooked mkay?

Wow, this is super interesting. I really enjoyed reading this. I will be patiently awaiting for an update :D

i like this so far. its keeping me wondering and keeping me reading. update soon please?

i like this.
it's original and sounds really interesting
update soon please!

I stole your comment Virginity(: Now, I must comment every chapter :P
Update soon!(: