The Dragon Tattoo - Comments

lol I would find a story I like that hasn't been updated in a year XD

Dude, this is so amazing. I love it :)

I like it! can't wait for more xD

I hope you write more. I've enjoyed the suspense!

A warehouse. Quite creepy. To be honest, I'd rather hide in a haunted house-like mansion because warehouses remind me of some gory vampire movie set in Alaska... 30 Days of Night or something like that.

I hope to learn more about Leon and perhaps Dawn's tattoo. Please update again soon c:

'thanks to my whopping....TWO!....subscribers.'

that made me laugh. :P anywhoo, I liked this chapter--it explained a bit more, but not so much as to keep you guessing. And the guy sounds hot. (:

Very interesting! I'm curious to see where it goes.

I think that the ending, or well, what she says is a little weird. Think about it. You've just been tackled, and you only say 'What do you want?' I'd be like, 'What the hell!' or I'd scream. But I suppose that may just be the character's way of handling it, so if that's the case, then ignore me.

Also, it gets a little confusing when you go from the future tense (when you're talking about how she's going to be tackled at 3:52) then you quickly go back to present tense, shortly after it happens.

But otherwise, I'm really excited for this story and hope you update again soon <3