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  • vices

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    oh my god
    i'm staring at my comment from three years ago and cringing so hard
    anyways, things are getting v-e-e-e-ry interesting.......
    can't wait to see what's next!
    January 5th, 2015 at 06:11am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :)
    Ooh... so Leighton's deciding to go to a party, huh? I wonder how everyone will treat her there? Does everyone else not take a liking to her like Kellan, since she just left like that? Are they all on Kellan's side?
    That's a lot of questions. lol. Sorry about that. You don't have to answer them; I'm sure we're going to find out in the next update or so.
    Great update! :D So glad that you posted a new chapter.
    Can't wait for more! Oh, and thanks for the shout-out! :D
    November 21st, 2011 at 01:53am
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    zjkhvlkahsdflkJHSDKFAHLSDKFjldkfjasd
    I still love this so much, I cannot.
    I dunno man, but if I were her dad, I'd just be like
    "QRL. HAAAAAAAAAAAALE NUH U CNT G0 OWT."
    update soon, please?
    November 17th, 2011 at 05:45am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :)
    Great job with the new chapter. Aw, poor Kellan. He obviously doesn't want to hear about Leighton right now, but that's all he's hearing about. :/ I don't blame him for being... resistent. I mean, she just left him, without showing that she even cared about what she was doing.
    But, well, I guess her dream of escaping made her miss that fact.
    Great update! Can't wait for more! :D
    October 25th, 2011 at 12:32am
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    oh goodness, I don't really like how Leighton just runs around, flaunting herself):
    and I feel terrible for Kellan! gosh, how he must feel right now.
    Please write more c:
    I'M EXCITED TO READ THE REST.
    October 24th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • Nanook

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    Yay, an update! Loved the new chapter!
    Hm... so Leighton's noticed that Kellan's changed. She's kind of being newflashed with what she missed.
    I dream of doing what she's doing one day. Like, after I graduate, go off, and don't come back for a while, if I do come back. Because the people in my town are the same way, and it's like, where's the adventure in them? When I come back I'll have stories to tell them. lol. And there will most likely be the same people.
    Anyway, enough of my rambling... :P Loved the update, and can't wait for more! :D
    September 19th, 2011 at 01:45am
  • LongLive;;

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    I'm so glad you updated!!! I'm curious to see more between Kellan and Leighton, and this new boy, Liam! Ah! haha, okay, that's it for my caffiene-induced ranting, I can't hit the right keys(:

    Loved it, hope to see another one soon :D
    September 18th, 2011 at 05:04am
  • vices

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    I love the way that this whole story just fits into my heart and mind, y'know?
    it's like a perfect puzzle piece in the mindless jumble in my head.
    I'd say update soon, but you just did, soooooooooo... but still.
    I can't wait to read what's next!
    Liam seems like a nice kid, and from how you describe him, quite easy on the eyes.
    September 18th, 2011 at 12:37am
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    I have fallen in love with this story.
    Please update soon(-:
    September 18th, 2011 at 12:01am
  • saeglopur

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    This was amazing what are you talking about? Amazing. Pure amazement. I haven't even realized just how much I enjoy this story. The whole Kellan describing how Leighton is back too soon seemed very realistic, I liked the whole thought process of this chapter, I thought Kellan was rather realistic about it. All in all I give this chapter a 9.8 because I wish it hadn't ended. Can't wait for more!
    August 21st, 2011 at 03:49am
  • Nanook

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    Aw, this doesn't stink. Don't say that. I really enjoyed the new update. :)
    Huh, so they finally confront one another. And I'd say it was a bit tense. But I guess you can't blame Kellan. :/
    Great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D
    August 19th, 2011 at 02:27am
  • LongLive;;

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    So, I'm really glad you updated. It was really emotional, and you could feel the history between them. I hope you update again soon, you're a great writer(:
    August 18th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • alexander bernadotte

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    Okay, so first of all, this layout is possibly the prettiest that I've ever seen. I can't even say more about it; it's lovely and I'm sooo jealous >.< Anyways, onto the review!

    Chapter 1: I love how you introduce Kellan and his family as they move into this new town, and I love it even more when you introduce Kellan and Leighton. I already like both of these people and their little friendship. It's just so adorable and realistic, this whole relationship that they have. And I really feel bad for Kellan when Leighton left Camden :( Poor guy. But now I'm glad that she's back and hopefully, maybe they can get their friendship back. This is a lovely start and I'm excited to find out what happens next to these two! <3

    Chapter 2: I'm probably stating the obvious, but Leighton has some style with her old car. I have a massive thing for old cars; I just find them really elegant for some reason, haha! Anyways, I really like Leighton. She's a free soul and I really envy people like that who can get up and go on their own. I really like how she goes back and remembers the places she used to go with Kellan and all of those memories.I really wonder what she's going to find at her old home; I totally thought for a second that her parents might still be living there and are currently out, but I'm excited to find out what she finds!

    Chapter 3: I can SO relate to Kellan's strife about the heat; dammit, Vegas is a freakin' oven during the summer -.- Yuck. I find Mike super funny, especially how he's dsecribing all of these chicks, trying to get Kellan hooked up xD But I love how he catches sight of Leighton and everything just stops for him. I really hope that they actually get together. <3

    Chapter 4: I feel bad for Leighton that she had to leave because her aunt died :( That's so devestating. </3 And I'm totally excited that she found Kellan again! Gah, you had to end that there xD Omg. I'm pumped now.

    PLEASE UPDATED THIS. I neeeed to know what happens next D: I'm in love with this and will be subbing and awaiting the next updated patiently - or not so xD Anyways, great job! <3
    August 13th, 2011 at 09:40am
  • saeglopur

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    OH MY GOD, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE. I WAS PRAYING THAT KELLAN WOULD WALK OVER TO HER AND HE DID YES YES YES UPDATE.
    August 10th, 2011 at 09:56pm
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    wow. i love this story.
    August 6th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update!
    Aw, so Leighton came back because of her aunt.
    And Kellan confronted her. I wonder what will happen next? :o
    Great update! Can't wait for more! :D
    Oh, and thanks for the shout-out in the author's note. :D
    July 31st, 2011 at 05:02am
  • LongLive;;

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    I"m glad I could inspire you, I know comments always help me.
    I didn't think it was terribly fillerish, I liked it. Hope you update soon(:
    July 26th, 2011 at 12:23am
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    The problem is that I never know what tonsay. Each chapter of this story, filler or not, leaves me speechless. I get lost in it, loose words and then can never find them again to write a decent comment expressing how I feel. I love this story.
    July 25th, 2011 at 05:43am
  • saeglopur

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    LOVE THIS

    Seriously, Kellan seems like just the type of ass I'd like, and I love the little tidbit about Leighton being careless. I never look before I cross the street. I also wonder what's going to happen at the summer kickoff pary! Can't wait!
    July 19th, 2011 at 07:23pm
  • Nanook

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    Aw, no. It doesn't sound like your other story! You should continue this!
    Hm... so Kellan spotted Leighton. And nearly had a heart-attack. What will happen now that he knows she's back in town? Will he confront her? Will she confront him? :o
    You're doing a great job with this. So please, continue, continue... :)
    Can't wait for more! :D
    July 13th, 2011 at 11:14pm