Ooh, I like this. Kellan and Leighton's relationship seems cute and at the same time deep, but I have a feeling that it's not going to last much longer. D: And the second chapter really got me wondering - why is Leighton going back home? What happened? I can't wait to read more. :)
First off, I am extremely jealous of your layout, it is absolutely stunning. As for the story, it was...interesting. It seems like a typical love story from what I can see. I thought the first chapter had too much summary, I actually would have liked to see the second chapter as the first, and have Leighton and Kellan's past revealed throughout the story. Showing rather than just telling. There were some nice lines, but, sadly, nothing that really stuck out to me. Your writing isn't bad, though. Good job :)
Hm... so Leighton makes her homecoming. And she doesn't seem too happy about it, although I think I'd feel the same way if I were her. I wonder how people will react to her return? Great update! Can't wait for more! :D
OH MY GOD I JUST NOTICED THAT THE BANNER CHANGES FOR THE CHAPTERS. That's so cool and original I love it. I loved this chapter too, I wonder why Leighton's home. And I can't wait to see how people respond to her being home, and I wonder what Kellan's going to say and think oh dear this is gonna' be so good! I CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE!
The layout is reaally pretty!! I love the direction this is going!! Keep up with it! -Sorry for the late comment, something came up right after I read your story.
Yay, you started this! :) Loved the first update. :) You kind of gave us a background and all, and... it has me even more interested to find out what you have happen in this story. :) Also, just from the prologue, everyone can tell you are a very talented writer. Your words sounded very professional. :D Can't wait for more of this! :D
Hehe, no need to thank me. This was a really wonderful beginning! It lets insight as to the relationship between Kellen and Leighton, which is quite tragic really but I find it interesting how the guy wants the mundane life while the girl goes free, I dunno why but it seems more like the guy skipping off to pursue a career in music or whatever and the girl's at home forgetting about him. I'm rambling sorrry. Anyway, I'm soooo curious about what's gonna happen now that Leighton's come home (even though she doesn't seem happy about it) so pretty please answer my question with an update? :)
awwwwww! This seems so cute, I can't wait for it to really begin. I love the name Leighton on a girl! I'm kinda angry she left Kellan like that, I hope things will mend between them though. Can't wait for more(:
I really loved the first taste of this story. :) Small town settings really get to me because I've grown up in one. There were a few grammatical errors but not many. I really think you should move forward with this because I want to know how it will unfold.