What I Didn't Expect - Comments

I love this chapter!
And It's been a while! But I"M HAPPY YOU UPDATED!
Hurry up with the next chapter

I love this chapter!
And It's been a while! But I"M HAPPY YOU UPDATED!
Hurry up with the next chapter

I love your story! Please update soon! =] Thanks for writing it!

As you asked me if I could read and comment, I'm gonna be critical...
Alright, first off, I really like the story, although stories where the adopted daughter (or biological, doesn't matter) gets with the father's friend aren't really my cup of tea
Um, Cassie's and Zacky's relationship processed a bit too fast in my opinion, he wasn't even broken up properly with Gena and he already asked Cassie if she will be his girlfriend and when she said that she will be when he isn't with her (Gena) anymore, she'll say yes and Zackky immediately went and broke up with Gena.....that's just so....weird....It all went so fast =/
Throughout all the 15 chapter, I found several mistakes (spelling, grammar and others), like forgetting to end the bolded text after you bolded a passage (same with italics), and some other things....maybe you should let someone check your chapters over or check them yourself again
Then I would like to give you an advice on your story layout. You have those...blue flames behind your text and those flames are honestly really irritating =/
But other than those, I really love the story
I hope that everything will go well for Zacky and Cassie
I can't wait for more
Hope you update soon =)

Nice chapter! I see you got some skills sweetie ;D
Lol jk. Update sooner!!

Sure they got serious alright,well this chapter was very surprising and very very fantastic,i love it.hope u update soon!!!:-))

Love it! So glad they're back together! :D
Update soon! I can't wait for more.

Love it! So glad they're back together! :D
Update soon! I can't wait for more.

*squeal and start singing*
They're back together! They're back together! They're back together!
I'm so happy right now!!! I'm jumping up and down on my bed!!!
Matt was being such an asshole but I'm glad he said sorry.
It was kinda sad when Cassie cut herself but hey! She's over it! :D
Update soon. Can't wait for more! :D

*squeal and start singing*
They're back together! They're back together! They're back together!
I'm so happy right now!!! I'm jumping up and down on my bed!!!
Matt was being such an asshole but I'm glad he said sorry.
It was kinda sad when Cassie cut herself but hey! She's over it! :D
Update soon. Can't wait for more! :D

*squeal and start singing*
They're back together! They're back together! They're back together!
I'm so happy right now!!! I'm jumping up and down on my bed!!!
Matt was being such an asshole but I'm glad he said sorry.
It was kinda sad when Cassie cut herself but hey! She's over it! :D
Update soon. Can't wait for more! :D

*squeal and start singing*
They're back together! They're back together! They're back together!
I'm so happy right now!!! I'm jumping up and down on my bed!!!
Matt was being such an asshole but I'm glad he said sorry.
It was kinda sad when Cassie cut herself but hey! She's over it! :D
Update soon. Can't wait for more! :D

*squeal and start singing*
They're back together! They're back together! They're back together!
I'm so happy right now!!! I'm jumping up and down on my bed!!!
Matt was being such an asshole but I'm glad he said sorry.
It was kinda sad when Cassie cut herself but hey! She's over it! :D
Update soon. Can't wait for more! :D

*squeal and start singing*
They're back together! They're back together! They're back together!
I'm so happy right now!!! I'm jumping up and down on my bed!!!
Matt was being such an asshole but I'm glad he said sorry.
It was kinda sad when Cassie cut herself but hey! She's over it! :D
Update soon. Can't wait for more! :D

OH MY GOD!! MATT'S SUCH A DICK!!! Poor Cassie :(
BUT I'M HAPPY THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER!! :D
Update soon! Love it.

OH MY GOD!! MATT'S SUCH A DICK!!! Poor Cassie :(
BUT I'M HAPPY THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER!! :D
Update soon! Love it.

OH MY GOD!! MATT'S SUCH A DICK!!! Poor Cassie :(
BUT I'M HAPPY THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER!! :D
Update soon! Love it.

Ooooooohhhhh shit!!!!!! *laughs*
Matt is gonna kick some asssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! *claps excitedly*
But I'm happy Vengeance and Cassie are together!!! *aww's*

Anywhoo!! This is a good chapter!! I can't wait to read more. But until then... ^_^

That was short but hey I love it! Update now 'cause I commented :D

I LOVE IT :) please update soon like real soon maybe like in a half hour haha jk :) but update soon please :)