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  • AllBecauseofYou

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    That did not turn out right so here, small fishes!
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    June 22nd, 2011 at 01:55am
  • AllBecauseofYou

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    And now, as promised, a fish
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    */ l / ________ Fat Fishy =D
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    June 22nd, 2011 at 01:53am
  • WonderfullyKaylee

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    No, no, no. Ryan really irritated me in chapter 17. He was denied. He needs to get over it. Plus Jason needs to get super jealous about the whole seen, because no matter how jerky he is I love him ♥ Ugh. I love this whole story, keep it up!!!
    June 21st, 2011 at 09:06pm
  • Emilise284

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    She should be with Jason... Ryan should be with Kelly... and happy ever after!!!!!!! um, second option, I think. I'd rather deal with Ryan later. Lay on the drama, too. Don't make Allie tell Kelly about the kiss... have her find out some other way, like Ryan telling her. Update soon!!!!!
    June 21st, 2011 at 08:44pm
  • Kill Me With Words

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    Unpopular opinion: I don't like the idea of Allen and Ryan together, it doesn't feel right. You did, or it seems like you did, put foreshadowing on a little thing with Allie and Jason. I liked that! It seemed to be cute. Her being with Ryan is too stereotypical. Ugh, I don't even know. It's late and I get ramble-y when it's late, so just ignore me.
    June 21st, 2011 at 11:50am
  • blank_pages95

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    Darn darn diggity darn... I reeeeaaaallllyyy wanted her to actually tell Kelly what happened.
    I personally think this whole Ryan thing should just diffuse and you should bring on the Jason!! :D
    I don't think her and Kelly little tid bit to be all dramatic
    June 21st, 2011 at 10:49am
  • cuteself22

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    omg !! Im starting to not lyk ryan !! he needs to give kelly a try !! And I lyk Tyler !! He cool. But yea, I think ryan needs to move on, and when he sees how incredible kelly is, then he wont need anyone else !! yeaaaa !!! lol... still great chapter.!
    June 21st, 2011 at 10:27am
  • AllBecauseofYou

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    I love encouraging you to update!!! =D
    If you update soon, I'll make you a fish! =)
    June 20th, 2011 at 06:54am
  • itsaKAYDEEthang

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    So I'm enjoying your story. My brain is still thinking on who Cass won't talk about. And I feel bad for Allie on her current situation. Kudos and I'll definitely be anticipating the next installment. XD
    June 20th, 2011 at 06:40am
  • Emilise284

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    I AM SO TEAM JASON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aw, poor Kelly, I have a feeling that they're going to get all mad at each other and make up and say "Let's never fight over a boy again, okay?".... I'm loving this story!!!!!!!!!! I've been reading it for a while but I had to catch up so... update soon please!
    June 20th, 2011 at 02:51am
  • blank_pages95

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    Good gosh!!! Why all the suspense?! Your killing me!! I just want her to tell Kelly. OMG Tyler is staying!!! *add hyperventilation* I LOVE it :D
    June 19th, 2011 at 08:23am
  • awbree

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    oh my goodness I can't wait for you to update! especially with the cliffhanger... :)
    June 18th, 2011 at 05:56am
  • brynjamin

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    So...way addicted to this story .
    I think I'm leaning towards Team Ryan, possibly because I picture him as this awesome guy I know named Ryan whom I may or may not have a thing for O.o
    But his character in the story's way awesome too, so I'd love him anyway .
    Bottom line: I love this story . Can't wait for Chapter 16 !
    June 18th, 2011 at 04:47am
  • Magical Normality

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    ... I like it.
    June 18th, 2011 at 03:03am
  • Kill Me With Words

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    So, I kinda died a little when I read this chapter. It was F A B U LO U S! ahaha i can't even... It was just great.
    June 17th, 2011 at 11:01pm
  • callmeadreamer

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    awww I LOVE!!!!
    im totally hooked (:
    update soon? please?
    June 17th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • cuteself22

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    I freaking love the story so far. but why does she hate jason sooo much ?!? I mean, I think she is jux tryin to hide her feelings. I like jason !! lmao :) update soon !!
    June 17th, 2011 at 10:39am
  • blank_pages95

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    Oh my goodness this is crazy!! I really hope she just tells Kelly and everything's ok. The title for 15 explains it all. Tyler is there and it's just well.... CRAZY. I loved it. I'm still team Jason
    June 17th, 2011 at 10:21am
  • DJ awesomeness

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    Aww..
    This story is amazing. :)

    I just read all fifteen chapters and i cannot for the life of me figure out which "team" I'd like to root for.. :/

    Annyyywaaayy...
    Puh-leez update soon. :)
    June 17th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • AllBecauseofYou

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    Ahh! Can't wait for your next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 17th, 2011 at 02:34am