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  • magicalpixie

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    this is the first story i ever commented on. totally deserves ten stars. it's awesome!
    June 15th, 2011 at 07:59pm
  • VengeanceUniversity

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    LOVE IT!.
    Sexy ass Matt. :P
    June 15th, 2011 at 07:56pm
  • saint james.

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    Good update. I can't wait for the truth to come out about who she really is. I'm glad you got ten stars this story defiantly deserves it. Please update very soon!
    June 15th, 2011 at 07:18pm
  • DrieGurl

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    Yesssss an update! *happy dance* Congrats on tens stars!
    June 15th, 2011 at 12:37pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    It's good that she has an ally, of sorts. And yeah, going to the ball with him sounds like TONS of fun. *cough* Anyway, I still love her attitude. lol. Shads had better love a challenge. ;-)

    Update ASAP!
    June 15th, 2011 at 06:53am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    This is hella good :) Thanks for updating!
    June 15th, 2011 at 04:54am
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Being owned by him sounds very kinky ;-). Wooooh for having a friend to help with getting to know the rules and everything. Oh damn no one ever goes with the masters and now she has too. Looooved it and I so can't wait for more
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:59pm
  • yellowjellybean14

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    omg when are they going to put to and two together and realize something is up with her. they are smart or at least i thought they were somewhat smart, please do not let them go on for like 40 chapters before starting to realize is syn's long lost daughter. please update soon when you get a chance hopefully with the guys realizing what they should have a long long time ago.
    June 14th, 2011 at 02:22am
  • saint james.

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    Great update. I love this story I cant wait for more. Please update very soon!
    June 14th, 2011 at 12:11am
  • DrieGurl

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    YAY! Updates.....Love the new chapter and can't wait for more! Hope some mores on the way.
    June 13th, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • Aaugustin

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    Moree :)
    June 13th, 2011 at 06:15pm
  • hachie

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    Wow at least she isn't going to be kept in the dungeon and that she won't be working as a whore for Avenged.
    I can tell that blonde bimbo whore is going to be cause trouble because some one even beautiful than her has become apart of the gang.
    And I knows sure all the Avenged are going to regret what they do to Rose since she from the rival gang.
    At least Johnny is nice to her and allows her some freedom, instead of being all mean like Syn and Shadows.
    I bet the whore is one of Shadows or Syn since she thinks she cane look down on the other the servants there when she is the worse!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 13th, 2011 at 06:01pm
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Well atleast working for them cleaning the manor is keeping her out of the dungeon..Lmao that girl might have learned her lesson. Uh Oh! Awww Johnny is being sweet lol...Loooooved it hehe
    June 13th, 2011 at 01:36pm
  • LindsaySometimes

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    Love this story.
    It seems interesting.
    Update soon.
    June 3rd, 2011 at 08:32pm
  • jesspurdy13

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    im so fucking in to this!! :D LOVE IT!!!!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 03:13am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I just caught up. lol. Didn't know you'd updated so many times in the last few days. =P

    I loved it!!!!!! Though it pains me that her target's name was Jacob. hahaha!
    June 1st, 2011 at 08:53am
  • DrieGurl

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    Just read 7 and i really like the new POV's but, no offense, its kinda obvious its a filler. Sorry. But great chapter none the less and i can't wait for the next update! Hope its soon!
    May 31st, 2011 at 11:51pm
  • saint james.

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    I am in love with this story! Awesome updates! I cant wait for her and the rest of the guys to find out all of the truth. Please update very soon again.
    May 31st, 2011 at 03:05am
  • hachie

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    Man that is going to be long way before everyone finds out that Rose is the actual daughter of Synyster Gates and life mate of Shadows.
    I seriously can't wait for that confrontation to come and that will be awhile!
    But I will definitely wait because things are getting very interesting and now she is in the grasp of Avenged.
    I wonder if her foster father knows that Rose has been captured.
    And very interesting to hear from Syn and Shadows POV.
    So Rose is more powerful than Syn since she was born a full fledge demon instead of a hybrid.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 30th, 2011 at 07:02pm
  • hachie

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    Wow they are pissed (mainly Syn and Shadows) that she killed Jacob.
    Man that must hurt as hell, to have Syn squeeze her leg wound when she didn't answer their questions.
    I am so excited for the future chapters!!!
    Now she is going through pain since she got caught and with her attitude, she is going give them hell!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 30th, 2011 at 06:43pm