Fallen Angel - Comments

I fucking love this story. So much. Thanks so much for double updates!

Oooooooooh seems they both think they've seen her. I loved getting the back story from Shads. and having a pov from Syn. Gives more to the story as now there's insight from them both. Goodness she is going to hate Syn and rightly so. Yay for the rev though :-). Looooved it hehe

chapter 6 kicked ass! I mean we get to meet the leaders and some weird tortureing? Yea that really just gave me some adrenaline to start my day off with! YAY! lol can't wait for more :P

i cant wait for her to find out about who she really is and for the guys to find out as well!

Oh my god that would suck to wake up like that. But yay for the Rev being sorta nice. Damn Syn and his grabbing of her wounded leg. She might need to listen to Rev's warning. I love how they all were like why is she being carried lmao. Looooved it hehe

OMG LOVE THIS STORY!!! I'm mad at you!! You ended on a total cliffhanger!!! UPDATE ASAP!!

Loooooove the action. It gave the story more of a darker edge since there wasn't much action before. Thanks for the update! Made my day lol :) since alot of author's don't really talk to people that comment like you do. It's nice!

Damn he was easy to take out. Offer sex and BAM! he's gone lmao. Jacob on the other hand fought like a mother fucker lmao. Uh oh the bosses have been called. Loooooved it hehe

I really like this! Thanks for updating!

Wow so she is also wondering about "her father" since he doesn't show any compassion to people in his area or those that live his house for that matter.
Because he doesn't scold Rose when she goes wild, he just let's her do what she wants.
From what she says it seems to me that he doesn't truly love her, at first he barely didn't but the more time he spent with her, he became some what affection toward her.
But he really doesn't give a shit about her.
At least she killed that man but of course Avenged will be there.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved the update. I want to know what is going to happen next. What is Avenged going to do with her? Update soon again!

I love it. Great update. Please update very soon!!!

Wow she is one bad ass and skilled killer!
I mean she can seduce me by just looking at them and she actually got what she wanted the second night she was there.
Man I am so excited to what will happen and if the Avenged know that she in their city.
So her driver is there to keep an eye on her and make sure nothing happens to her.
So that's why they gave her that kind of apartment, so she can be under the radar from Avenged.
I cannot wait until she meets the avenged and if Brian will recognized her right away.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love the story so far an can't wait to read more! Subscription time! :P

I loved the chapter. Can't wait got more :D

Wow her so called father is one fucked up dude!
Instead of killing Lissianna Rose since she is the daughter of Synyster Gates, he raised her as his own so he could make Synyster suffer.
What makes it worse, he turned her against her true family and made her believe that she is Damon's daughter.
Ewwww that apartment is really gross!
Couldn't have they gotten a slightly better one???
I am so excited for the next update, I cannot wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awww well it's sweet they care for her like that. Ew that apartment sounds completey disgusting. Uh oh. Time to play huh. Loooooved it hehe

Just read all three chapters and I'm totally into this! You'd better update soon!

Lmao Leo better be glad she didn't hit him for waking her up like that. Lmao they know better. Uh oh staying in the City Of Evil for a bit. I loooooved it and I so can't wait for more

I REALLY like it so far. It seems very intersting. Wonder whats going to happen next. Update very soon please