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  • vices

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    OOH SNAP.
    ANGELIQUE, YOU JUST GOT THE RECEIVING END OF WHAT'S CALLED A BURN.
    HAVE YOU HEARD OF IT?
    oh.
    well then.
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    MMMMMMMMMMMMMMHMM.
    SUCK IT, BITCH.
    please update soon c:
    January 17th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • CatchingDreams

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    I love it :D their date is just so cute! XD
    January 8th, 2012 at 04:54pm
  • iRawrPurplePandas

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    Awwww!! Cute chapter!!
    January 8th, 2012 at 05:49am
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    "Whatever makes you happy, Norah."
    THAT'S YOU, PROSPER.
    THAT'S YOU. ;D
    please update soon, oh my goodness, this was so adorable c:
    January 8th, 2012 at 02:07am
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    Prosper is such a cool ass name for a guy.
    Actually, it's a cool name for both genders!
    I like the story, keep up the good work!
    January 3rd, 2012 at 08:52am
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    ASDFAKSDJHACVKLSJDFHAKLSJDFHLAKSJDHF
    THAT WAS ADORABLE
    I can't even, like.
    please update soon c:
    AND, thank you for such a quick update!
    December 30th, 2011 at 07:45am
  • iRawrPurplePandas

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    Awww, I love this!!!
    Can't wait for more!!
    December 30th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • slumflower

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    Also in chapter 10: Chris laughed lightly and the teacher sent a glare our way and they looked at our work. you switch tenses from third person to first person.

    Well he’s defiantly no god (ch. 10), definitely?

    He hated kinds in the worst way. - (ch. 12) kids?

    “So you’re they’re babysitter.” - (ch. 14) should be their instead of they're

    I'm actually not finished reading all of the chapters but I'm making my way through the chapters >:D
    December 30th, 2011 at 06:59am
  • slumflower

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    The layout is so beautiful! the summary quickly grabbed my attention and I really wanted to start reading. When it first started, introducing that Prosper was the jocky popular kid and Norah was the one who wasn't falling all over him, I was kind of like, 'cliche, cliche, oh geez.' but I kept on reading and I'm really glad I did!
    I freakin' love this!! I think Norah's just rad but Prosper is just too cute even if Chris is more my type, hah!
    update soon, yeah? :D
    ps. I could stare at the layout for hours, I love the background color so much!
    December 30th, 2011 at 06:45am
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    OH MY LORD THAT IS SO ADORABLE.
    I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS CHAPTER.
    UGH.
    LOVE YOU.
    c:
    please update soon!
    I'm so glad Prosper and Chris are back on track(:
    December 29th, 2011 at 11:25pm
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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWH SHUCKS.
    this chapter was just too cute, I'm startin' to really love this soft side of Prosper's c:
    please update soon!
    December 28th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • akanevampire19

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    Love last chapter! =D THEY KISS!! Wooooohooooo! ^.^
    December 27th, 2011 at 04:17am
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    oh you are e-e-e-e-e-evil.
    you are truly terrible for cutting it off there.
    not cool! ;c
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON, okay?
    Norah's little brother sounds like a cheeky little shit, I like him(:
    October 11th, 2011 at 06:03am
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    Merp! I wanna give this story a hug.
    A BIG OL' MONSTER HUG
    :D Plz update soon
    October 11th, 2011 at 05:16am
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    I love Liam! He's so cute! hahaha xD And he told Prosper too much! xD Update soon! =D
    October 11th, 2011 at 03:04am
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    Love the new chapter! I think its really cute how they're getting closer :) hope all goes well with the dinner, hehe x
    October 10th, 2011 at 11:54pm
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    yayyyy <3
    October 10th, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • akanevampire19

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    My favorite chapter is 25!!! =D I'm glad they are getting along! ^.^
    October 10th, 2011 at 09:29pm
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    I hope Prosper is okay! =( Update soon =)
    October 10th, 2011 at 01:45pm
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    I really respect Prosper for trying to defend his mom, he's a good kid at heart ^.^
    October 10th, 2011 at 05:09am
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