How to Be Human - Comments

HOLY CRAP THIS IS AMAZING. I especially love how you write Amalie and ugh, this is just so good and you write so well.

I already like Anabela. At first I thought she would be one of those councillors that just were fake and didn't really care about the person. But now I see that Anabela really does care about Amalie and has her best interest at heart.
But how are they going to explain to Amalie how the world works?

I love that Amalie is so enamored by what we usually overlook or take advantage of. she loves being human, she loves colors, and we tend to overlook that while we're caught up in the business of our lives and I just really really love Amalie as a character ((((:

You don't know how excited I get when I see you've updated this story. I need some more Caleb next chapter! Eep! But I do love this girl, she's uber innocent & adorable & sweet and I just wanna hug her

They are so gentle with her, it's beautiful to read. And I find myself imagining how would I even begin to feel if that was me. Would I know what feeling is? Another great chapter, Bravo

The scene with the grilled cheese made me so hungry, haha. I loved the chapter so much! It was a pleasure reading about Peter's life. I really feel for your characters, even though your story's just started. I love it! Keep writing!

Otay this is going to be a crap comment because I'm waiting for the sims to load and then I'm going to play for like 389768943 hours so yeah.

Naw Amalie stop being weird and eat. (And also I shouldn't have read this chapter right now 'cause I'm kind of hungry but it's close enough to dinner to wait. Kind of.)

Ugh you're really making me hate scientist/creepy Father dude right now.

Jollity?
/qurl i luv u but

(I'm sensing some criticism of religious people who think that reading scriptures and attending church make them good people and I sincerely hope you're going to leave it at that because I have 34867398763 things to say on the topic and I don't want to rant aboot it.)

Ugh omfg feels about his mum pls no

Ugh cute!Amalie pls no

/that was longer than usual whoops didn't notice

woo yeah nano~

SO YEAH I THINK THIS WAS 100% TANGNETS SO UM GOOD JOB AND DON'T EVER UPDATE EVERYTHING AT ONCE AGAIN OTAY BYES

GO WRITE HEPPY

I love this story! I'm a new reader and I came across this story because someone recommended it to me. I'm so glad that they did. This story is nothing like I have ever read before because it is so unique and creative. I love how there is no official points of view, but the reader can kind-of see who is telling the story. I love the way you write, it's super amazing. I also like the layout.
I am totally subscribing and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

oh man *Caleb

oh man *Caleb

oh, I LOVE the way you describe how she feels when she eats! pardon the philosophical-esque musings here, but often times, we're leading such fast-paced lives that we forget to slow down and just take everything in, and that goes for eating, too!

GREAT CHAPTER. I'm seriously wondering where Calib is rn!

Their "family" dynamic is so interesting LOVE this story

That was such a long update, I LOVE YOU! This story is great.

Oh my gooooood this chapter was INCREDIBLE! Caleb was just adorably bashful.
I was smiling like an idiot the whole time :) MORE PLEASE!

This is so amazing, I love it!

(Delia seems a bit presumptuous right now, not gunna lie. I'm only at the beginning of the chapter at the moment, but you noes. (Also I'm going to assume that a lot of people do that to their friends because I sometimes hear stories about that sort of thing. Yep.))

HOW DID I NOT SEE THE NUDITY COMING?
(and lawl how did I not see the 'SHE' SO PERF' description coming?)

Just so you noes, Gramps, there are other ways to say 'bro was turned on'. It's not mandatory to always say 'heated'. (Just in case you forgot. )

But ugh gurl u suck go write more.
(Srsly, write and update. Write and update.)

That was cute, (damn you Internet!) he clearly has raw attraction to her, can't wait to see how this progresses

I still love this sosososososo much! It's beautiful and I love this side of Caleb! I love this. It's... just please don't stop again.

Ah!:DD they're both adorbs, that poor girl. I can't wait to see all her progress.

Really good! Looking forward to the next update!! :D