June 19th, 2011 at 07:54pm
Before I start, I would like to just tell you that this will be short and quick due to the fact that I must judge all the other entries. I'll be able to give you a full review on your next entries.
My god, girl, you must be really popular or something! You got a lot of points to be added for comments. x D
8 out of 10 points for Originality.
I had expected at least a couple of something like this for 'it takes one to know one', but you did a fair job of keeping it tolerable.
5 out of 5 points for Quality
15 out of 15 points for Prompt
8 out of 10 points for Capturing Attention
My attention was caught, but a bit hard to keep since I had a faint idea of how the story would end.
10 out of 10 points for Spelling, Vocab, etc.
Total Points: 46 points plus 2 extra for word count = 48 points
(I'll add the comment points as I post the round one scores.
This made me laugh
When she said
I know you are so what am i,
I cracked up laughing,
I used to say this as a child.
Excellent work lol
I think you should continue it :D
xxx