May 28th, 2011 at 08:21pm
Haha, oh my god, I f*cking loved this.
When Cassie said " I know you are, but what am I?" it just cracked me up.
Your layout it gorgeous and matches the drabble very well, I don't think anything else would be appropriate for this.
I loved how childish the girls acted, it depicts actual girls in real life.
I did find one mistake though, sorry if it bothers you, but I like it when people point out my mistakes.
When you said "All you do is like to me.." I think you meant "All you do is lie to me.."
Anyways, I liked this a lot.
Really really awesome job.C:
(By the way, I think the one in the dress, Cassie is a f*cking-whore, I'd like to knock her lights out).
One: Although this should be marked as a short story, not a drabble (because they're exactly 100 words), I really liked this. If you set your mind to this, I'm sure this could be turned into a story. "I know you are, but what am I?" and "It takes one to know one." were my favorite lines. c:
I found one mistake; You meant to put 'lie' but you ended up putting 'like' in the second paragraph.