Bitch - Comments

  • Layout: Your layout is fantastic, but I think it would look better if the solid colour was the background, and the background was where the solid colour is. I really like the banner, and the colours are awesome.

    One: Although this should be marked as a short story, not a drabble (because they're exactly 100 words), I really liked this. If you set your mind to this, I'm sure this could be turned into a story. "I know you are, but what am I?" and "It takes one to know one." were my favorite lines. c:

    I found one mistake; You meant to put 'lie' but you ended up putting 'like' in the second paragraph.
    May 28th, 2011 at 08:21pm
  • Haha, oh my god, I f*cking loved this.
    When Cassie said " I know you are, but what am I?" it just cracked me up.

    Your layout it gorgeous and matches the drabble very well, I don't think anything else would be appropriate for this.
    I loved how childish the girls acted, it depicts actual girls in real life.

    I did find one mistake though, sorry if it bothers you, but I like it when people point out my mistakes.
    When you said "All you do is like to me.." I think you meant "All you do is lie to me.."

    Anyways, I liked this a lot.
    Really really awesome job.C:
    (By the way, I think the one in the dress, Cassie is a f*cking-whore, I'd like to knock her lights out).
    May 28th, 2011 at 08:19pm
  • that was amaaazingggg(:
    May 28th, 2011 at 07:59pm
  • This was really funny & iLiked it a bunch. iWonder who these Cassie & Breanne girls are based from. My guess is you would be Breanne? iWould love this to be continued.
    May 28th, 2011 at 07:58pm