Dark Come Soon - Comments, page 8

thedarksnowqueen (100)

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For Hagrid, instead of 'to' it should be 'ter' and instead of 'your/you're' it should be 'yer'. That's the main part of his speaking that I remember most. I'm reading Deathly Hallows right now. I don't mean to sound like a nazi grammar (although I am), but I thought I'd point out the talking thing.

I'm happy Mona is getting through to Alex. She needs to become social again. Update soon?

July 3rd, 2011 at 01:24am

fabulous_39 (100)

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hahahahaha I LOVE MONA
Cant wait for the next one :D

June 28th, 2011 at 02:47pm

fictionsymphony (100)

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I think you did a fine job with Hagrid and with entertwining things in the muggle and wizard world. I'm really loving this story so far. <3

June 28th, 2011 at 01:07pm

The Silver Snitch (100)

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Loved the update.
Mona and Alex are bonding extremely well.
Can't wait for the boys to get involved in this story.
Anticipating new chapters !

June 28th, 2011 at 09:43am

bapple (100)

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I'm really glad Mona got Alex out of her room, she's starting to open up! It's great :)
Really can't wait for school to start for them and see how things go with Draco and Ron! This is going to be a freakin' awesomely fantastic story!!! <3 <3
I look foward to this story update more than the others I'm suscribed to lol, so update soon pretty please :D

June 28th, 2011 at 05:50am

hachie (100)

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OMG this story keeps getting better and addicting at the same time!
I can't wait until the actions and drama! X3
So Mona has been living at Hogwarts for a long time, that she knows all the staff and the hideouts!
Man to live in castle like Hoogwarts has to be an amazing thing! XD
I wish I lived there!
Mona helping Alex get more and getting her use to exploring instead of being cooped up in her room.
LOL Everyone seems to be awed and shocked by Mona's lipring since it's popular muggle fashion.
I cannot wait for the next update! XD
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

June 27th, 2011 at 09:58pm

UltraViolett (100)

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I loved Hadgrid's accent, I think it was good :)
more soon please? I loved it!!

June 27th, 2011 at 08:59pm

avenging angel (100)

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I thought he accent was pretty good :) i can't wait for them to interact with their guys!:0 great update!!!:)

June 27th, 2011 at 05:41pm

ameliabelle (100)

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ooooooo very nice :)
loved it

June 26th, 2011 at 02:22am

ForeverPlagued (100)

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Loved it! More soon, please?

June 25th, 2011 at 07:24am

hachie (100)

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So because of her ability like her mothers, she became reclusive because of how other people treated her?
That is really messed up but at least Ramona is going to be there and since she has become friends with her already.
LOL her mother juts makes me laugh, and Alex is the complete opposite, she more reserved than her mother.
I look forward to the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

June 25th, 2011 at 03:09am