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  • xxErika411xx

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    Wow its been a while since the last time I read this story. I don't know what to say about melissa and alex having sex after he broke up with her. What to say about lani... you can tell how lost she is after everything that happened with alex and then with conner and her having mixed feelings about him. I can't wait what will happen next.
    June 3rd, 2014 at 07:27am
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    @ MoMo_92
    Why do you find Melissa annoying? haha
    and oh ;) it's interesting you feel that way ;) I hope you like what happens next!
    Thank you so much for being a loyal reader and commenter! <3
    June 3rd, 2014 at 06:05am
  • MoMo_92

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    Melissa is an interesting character idk whether to say she is dumb or annoying, as for Milan hanging out with Connor let her she needs to love on so y not hang with Connor, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 3rd, 2014 at 05:49am
  • MoMo_92

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    Damn it's been a while since u last updated, how's it goin I'm doin fine myself....so did Alex just have break up sex with Melissa and she didn't even kno it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 2nd, 2014 at 05:29pm
  • MuffinRice

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    It's been so long since you updated and I just want to let you know, I've been waiting forever for an update! :P You have a beautiful story here. Take your time, I'll still be waiting! (:
    July 27th, 2013 at 06:30pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Amazing as always, update soon please :)
    March 1st, 2013 at 11:19pm
  • PaCoThePanda

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    I just read this whole thing in 4 hours talk about no life lol :) but was this it I doubt it please update my life depends on it XD
    February 19th, 2013 at 02:45am
  • ALIxgaskarth

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    it still makes me cry :(
    February 3rd, 2013 at 03:29pm
  • amariela

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    Omg I love love loveeeeeeee this story! I can feel every emotion from Lani when I'm reading, it's amazing. You do a very good job at portraying her (: anyway I bet her whole family is just so lost right now besides Alex and Matt but I feel like I'd be doing the same thing if I was her.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 08:37am
  • nathalii47

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    <3!
    January 29th, 2013 at 12:59pm
  • xxErika411xx

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    If I was in Lani's place I would do the same thing. You can definitely feel all the anger and frustration she had when she was in the bathroom. She seriously needs to talk to Alex for they can talk about everything that is going on with them.
    January 29th, 2013 at 12:04am
  • FallenTorment

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    I love it!
    January 28th, 2013 at 07:44pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Wow tht was amazing I felt the emotions tht Milan was feeling in this entire chapter, I think she needs to talk to Alex alone so he can explain himself idk can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 28th, 2013 at 06:28am
  • ciarradical

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    a543azrewarwesxdxdxzfdasdfghjklhgftyc this is so perfecty
    January 28th, 2013 at 04:13am
  • deactivatedError

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    This was amazing girly I loved how well you captured the tension and anger going on I can't wait to see whats up next :)
    January 28th, 2013 at 03:52am
  • user4536213

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    Yea! You updated!!
    I love this story though it was a sad chapter.
    Please update again soon!
    January 28th, 2013 at 03:10am
  • I'm-seeing-stars

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    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
    December 29th, 2012 at 04:03am
  • Mali

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    Update update update! I missed this
    December 18th, 2012 at 01:15am
  • user4536213

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    Love this! PLEASE update again soon!
    December 3rd, 2012 at 06:59am
  • MoMo_92

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    Hmm so tht wasn't expecting tht but let's just hope tht she does think things through, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 3rd, 2012 at 04:47am