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  • terrible things.

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    Baylee shouldn't be sorry! Crystal should. Brian needs to quit playing Michelle and Crystal anyway. Or is Crystal playing Brian? 0.0 Update soon please!
    July 9th, 2011 at 12:25am
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    pretty good chapterrr.(:
    July 2nd, 2011 at 05:37am
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    I knew I was going to like this because it was a Avenged Sevenfold Story ...

    But yeah, I like this story it's cute and one thing that I really like is how the dialogue flows easily and isn't forced like I see in some stories.

    One of the major things I like is how this is a Zacky story right? But it's not super obvious, like it wasn't like they just met anz they're alrady in love with each other, I see that too much. Like I love how she's not totally forgetting about her boyfriend (even though I think he's a douche) to hang out with the band.

    Sorry I'm rambling again , but If you can't tell I really liked this xD
    <3
    July 1st, 2011 at 05:48pm
  • terrible things.

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    I KNEW BRIAN AND CRYSTAL WERE DOING SOMETHING, I KNEW IT!! That's just cold though, I hope Michelle rips out their vital organs... or maybe not.. I wonder if Caleb was okay with this..... If not, more drama! I'm glad he apologized. Lol, update soon please!
    June 27th, 2011 at 01:26am
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    I like how Zacky stood up for Baylee..and I did't like how much of a dick Caleb was to Baylee, it was uncalled for, but I am happy that he apologized....and that Baylee & Crystal are friends with the guys.
    good update!(:
    June 22nd, 2011 at 08:11am
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    I like this. Also due to the fact that you mentioned Carolina Rebellion (Which is where I saw them ^-^) that just made me happier. Keep it up!
    June 22nd, 2011 at 05:24am
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    Awh yeeah, the musically talented, sexy men are comin into the picture now..time for the good times and parties to start...haha(:
    June 20th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • laceyvengeance

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    It's cute. And I understand that normally the first few chapters of stories are kinda bleh, but I think you need to throw something that'll shake things up a bit kinda soon, but it's just a suggestion/my oppinion.(:
    June 13th, 2011 at 07:21am
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    Aw sweet love this update soon please
    June 12th, 2011 at 10:38am
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    NO! YOU NEED SPARK IN THIS RELATIONSHIP! Damn, I'm getting into this a bit too much. :) Update soon.
    June 11th, 2011 at 03:37am
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    I like this, it's honesty original, or at least with what I've read. Please update soon.
    June 4th, 2011 at 06:38am
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