Baylee shouldn't be sorry! Crystal should. Brian needs to quit playing Michelle and Crystal anyway. Or is Crystal playing Brian? 0.0 Update soon please!
I knew I was going to like this because it was a Avenged Sevenfold Story ...
But yeah, I like this story it's cute and one thing that I really like is how the dialogue flows easily and isn't forced like I see in some stories.
One of the major things I like is how this is a Zacky story right? But it's not super obvious, like it wasn't like they just met anz they're alrady in love with each other, I see that too much. Like I love how she's not totally forgetting about her boyfriend (even though I think he's a douche) to hang out with the band.
Sorry I'm rambling again , but If you can't tell I really liked this xD <3
I KNEW BRIAN AND CRYSTAL WERE DOING SOMETHING, I KNEW IT!! That's just cold though, I hope Michelle rips out their vital organs... or maybe not.. I wonder if Caleb was okay with this..... If not, more drama! I'm glad he apologized. Lol, update soon please!
I like how Zacky stood up for Baylee..and I did't like how much of a dick Caleb was to Baylee, it was uncalled for, but I am happy that he apologized....and that Baylee & Crystal are friends with the guys. good update!(:
It's cute. And I understand that normally the first few chapters of stories are kinda bleh, but I think you need to throw something that'll shake things up a bit kinda soon, but it's just a suggestion/my oppinion.(: