I'm very surprised that this story isn't more popular. I am completely enthralled in the storyline and I can't wait for the next chapter, so keep 'em comin':)
It's really cool and funny. I'm shocked that nobody has comment on this story. I love how it's original and actually realistic compared to Twilight. Keep on updating. I will be waiting. :D. Oh, and one more thing. I'm not trying to out you or commanding you to do this but 'your' is the pronoun and 'you're' is the contraction. I just don't want you to get reported for that simple error.