Stockholm - Comments

Eek!!!!!!! Anatole gains major points!!! :) I like when Linus walks in on them hahaha hahaha great job update soon!

If I had a nickel for every time I read this story :) I would be rich! Did you kno tht loo is a toilet not a person! Lol ah I need to get out more. Thanks for updating! Anatole definitely needs to kiss her more and yu should totally describe his body! We don't mind :) update soon!

Great story - I don't comment a lot, but I really like the emotions and the way it's looking...I hope there's a climactic ending like he has to kill the girl but can't do it type of thing.That would be awesome. But really good writing-keep it up!

great chapter!! :) Love the mistletoe... and Anatole paints? That was unexpected! and the new banner is HOTT! i squealed happily when i saw it, not going to lie. :D

Well, miss Elizabeth, I'd say you're quite lucky. Not once, but twice in a day you get a lil' ol' comment from me. You know, just for a random tidbit, whenever someone says 'don't ever change', I instantly think of Lizzie McGuire, or hwvr you spell her name/show. I never watched it, but I got a lot of those signatures in my yearbooks over the years. XD Anyway, back to the main subject: your story. Wow. It's not even Christmas yet and I'm already giggling giddy at the edge of my seat. I can't wait for something to happen! You know that funny awful feeling you get when you're slowly ascending a giant rollercoaster? Well that's the feeling I'm getting right now with all the winter love in the air! The anticipation is killing me. And if you wait to swirl in the intense chemistry for Stealth, WOMAN, I will be mad. Just sayin'.
I forgot to point it out in my last comment, but in the last chapter, my favorite part was the walk to the park. I loved how you described the change in season and just how long she had been away from devouring the nature of being outside. (winter is also my favorite season, so I may be a bit bias) I could feel the chill weather and I could picture just what she was seeing. It almost made me wish summer was over. Almost. I'm not that desperate.... yet. xD
And in afterword, the banner. You know I had to say something about that banner. Whooo, girl, my mind went blank for a second or two. I didn't have to try and imagine hard what Kalila saw when Anatole opened his bedroom door. *sigh* Just thinking back to clicking that link, and wondering what surprise awaited me, is getting me all hot and bothered. I think I'll cut this one short so I can play with the link in the chapter.
Thanks for updating, creating the breathtaking banners you do, and for writing such amazing chapters. (:

Ah, you're back with those tempting pictures, banners, and layouts again. Sometimes I wonder if you know it'll get a rise out of the readers. *cough cough like me cough cough* xD I know it seems that's all I comment about, but I just have to get that little whimsical feeling out of me before I tell you how much of an awesome job you did with your current chapter. So, here it goes. :) Stockholm has mainly been about Kalila and her involvement with Anatole's line of work, and now you're slowly introducing just what got him going into the transition of his business now. I like that aspect, and how you're going about it. Especially since you've decided to spin a sequel into the mix. Also, since she's been his 'captive' for quite a little while now. Christmas is coming up aaaaaaaand, I'm a sucker for holidays so I'm really anticipating that one. Like mrsgregcarter said above me, things should be getting interesting. (;

love the new chapter! I am getting a Linus-likes-Kalila vibe... is that just me? I love the chemistry between Kalila and Anatole, though. Two men in the same house with a pretty young girl... could get messy!! Christmas ought to be interesting. :) Can't wait, and SUPER excited about the sequel!!!

Oh my goodness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought something was going to happen between those two when he took her to her room! Ugh iits killing me. Your such ah good writer. Please update soon :)

I'm sensing a quirky air of mystery about this Linus character. A smooth introduction to him, by the way. Right after that very cute date they went on, and to have the new guy make it painfully aware about the wavy chemistry between the two. Nice. (;
I'm definitely looking forward to how Mr. Johnson plays into this. So many scenarios are playing in my head and I'll know you'll do better than my silly imagination. xD Thank you for updating and for the pretty banners you always make. (:

Im so excited!!!!! Linus! i feel something is going to happen and he will end up likeing her hahah please update!!!!

They're falling for each other :3

OH my gosh this is such a good story! Update soon please(:

*happy squeals* Love it! I don't like this guy Linus, though, he seems a little too shady. of course, he is a kidnapper by trade...but then again so is Anatole. lol. anyway, I love this story so much, I look forward to every update! keep up the wonderful writing!

CUUUTEEE!!!! It was cute when he caught her from falling, but the roses really were the cherry on top! :D I never get tired of staring at that man's face and I gotta say I love that you have a new banner for every chapter! HOTT

Ah!!!!!!! It was definitely ah date! :) please update more!

Ah!!!!!!! It was definitely ah date! :) please update more!

Ah!!!!!!! It was definitely ah date! :) please update more!

You should do a sequel! I would read it ;)
Great chapter!
Please update soon.

A sequel? The possibility of one? Sheesh, do you really need to ask? YES. Yes, you do, because you need to hear what I have to say (or rather, read what I type). A sequel would be fantastic, luring in the deep mystery of why her father doesn't give two shits to care enough to put out a missing person's report! Oooh, if I could slap someone through my computer, it'd be Kalila's father. But, then again, if he hadn't have waited so long, there would never be the sexy man she deals with everyday, so a blessing in disguise, really. And also, you've got me wondering just who is the mystery network behind Anatole's kidnapping operation. (thanks, by the way, for letting me know how to pronounce his name. haha) Honestly, I think a sequel would be very interesting to further read if you completely leave me and your handful of other readers hanging.
And yet another lovely banner to feast my eyes on! Gorgeous. ^.^

oooh this is interesting! Venturing out into the world... and she's starting to notice him as handsome, which is promising. :)
i think a sequel would be fun! :P