June 16th, 2011 at 05:17pm
Stockholm - Comments
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful is what instantly came to mind with that new banners of yours. Most authors don't treat the readers with smexy delicacies as such. So, thank you for that. :) As for the pace, you're doing great. The suspension is a gradual build which is sometimes hard for most authors to achieve. They either rush, skip it entirely, or wait too long. And for the "in-between" until you start throwing me to the edge of my seat, you're doing a really good job at making me swoon every chapter (yet again, it's probably due to your lovely layout xD). Keep up the awesome work Elizabeth! (:June 16th, 2011 at 04:20am
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Eeek, it's so great! Can't wait for more!June 15th, 2011 at 11:33pm
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I really like this story! The only problem is reading it because of the font color. Maybe it's just the computer I'm on? Not too sure, but the background is dark and the font is dark, too! Keep going! I can't wait to see what happens next!June 15th, 2011 at 09:23pm
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Love it! ><June 9th, 2011 at 09:28pm
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Awsome Update!
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i really like this story and im excited to read more :)June 8th, 2011 at 06:45am
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I must confess. While reading the first chapter, it took me quite a while to reach the end. I couldn't keep my eyes off the background of your layout. xD Ian's so damn distracting! In a good way, of course. Well, when I finally did finish chapter one and then onto the rest, I thoroughly enjoyed reading them. I'm quite interested in the whole kidnapping fiasco and what A could possibly be hiding with all those files and pictures and whathaveyous. Color me intrigued. (:June 8th, 2011 at 05:35am
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hahaha.. I'd probably be very happy in her situation (because he look like Ian Somerhalder) Anyways keep up the good work. Can't wait until the next update :)June 8th, 2011 at 05:11am
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I really like this story. I'm excited to see where this goes. My favorite thing about this story is all the pics of Ian Somerhalder. Gosh... He's amazing. Is that what the kidnapper is supposed to look like?June 8th, 2011 at 01:57am
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I'm liking this. He's definitely an interesting character. He's nice, yet a kidnapper. It's different. But I definitely think that the main female character should be more realistic. She would be scared and untrusting. How would you be able to trust a man who just kidnaps you and knocks you out. You'd be scared and even if your cat was nice, your thoughts probably wouldn't change automatically.
So don't think that I'm bashing your story. It's awesome and you should keep writing but maybe somehow lead her to disbeleaf. Hope this helps. Also, damn he's good looking. hahaJune 7th, 2011 at 11:08pm -
OMG! I love the picture by the way! Also this is really good! Please update!
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KEEP. totally keep, okay? I really like where this is going!June 7th, 2011 at 10:05pm
Please update soon!
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