Toys - Comments

I agree with everyone else. This is one of my favourite stories. You should definitely make a sequal!

This was really god.

you should make a sequal to this:3

Wow absoulutely amazing. I was amazed and enthralled. It was captivating and amazing. Would love to see a sequal :)

Holy crap. This is was so good! You should write a sequeal to it :) I was so emotionally triggered by this, I cried! It was really good :) But it did scar me... Haha, oh well. It had a perfect ending, great job!

this totally needs a sequel!

I started reading it today and couldn't stop! Amazing story like always!
Aww, I cried during the reading the letter :(

Wow I just started reading, and went ahead and finished it. Truly amazing. I cant believe she just left though, im still kind of rooting for them to be together. But the ending was good. Great job :)

I finish reading toys from start to end and I find it great. I really enjoyed the whole story.
Good job and keep writing!
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeesssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooommmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

make an sequel plz! It will make me happy...

The last sentence to the last chapter ripped my heart out. I cried. It was lovely and beautiful, sad and heartbreaking. Horrible yet amazing ending to this story.

haha sorry guys, no sequel :(
When I started writing Toys, I knew that I wasn't going to let it have a happy ending. A sequel would ruin it. And thank you all so much for all the comments :)

I LOVE this story SOOO much. It's so interesting and unpredictable. This my first time commenting because I started reading the story today so I decided to comment all at once. Anyway did I mention I LOVE this story, you should make a squel since I did not expect the ending at all. Anyway continue the great work I LOVE this story by the way :)

oh and defs need a sequel

He married Linda. Hes still in love with Kaitilin

awww that was sad
and i agree with cali_cookies you do need a sequel

awwwwww :(

You need a sequel lol

baww

"But can you blame me? I'm in love with her. I can't control myself when I'm around her."

THAT pissed me off. How DARE he even try to come up with an excuse. LOVE doesn't make someone abusive. It's the other emotions that override the love that make that happen. Jealousy, fear. There is no excuse for that. The fact of the matter is that he let his jealousy, anger, loneliness and fear of losing her take over him. It's one thing to change but it is another to completely disregard your previous actions by saying that they were done out of love. You do not harm someone because you love them. Shane is a dumb ass who needs to learn a thing or two.