that doesn't mean he's twenty, you know? :) Don't worry, their ages are there in my head, I won't screw it up. p.s anyone who has a problem with their huuuge age difference, I'd just like to point out that their age difference was part of the plan. I don't know why but it seemed to support the story better. :)
i love ur story, but i thought id point out that in the beginning u said she was 16 and he was 26, but in ur new update when she is 14 he's 20. so what im saying is that their age differents is off, and he should b 22 if shes 16 now. i just thought that was funny and weird at the sametime. hope that helped some, but keep up the good work. =^_^=