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  • Sleepy-San

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    Bahhhhhhhhh. I love this. Need to know more about the past! Subbing!
    September 20th, 2011 at 12:20am
  • Tofindme

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    uhoh he go murdered.
    September 19th, 2011 at 11:13pm
  • itsjackz

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    who killed shayne??
    update soon please i want to know!!
    September 19th, 2011 at 10:59pm
  • ScreamingIntheNight

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    That last chapter was so sad. Please update soon!!
    September 19th, 2011 at 12:33pm
  • bernardbananahammock

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    Aww poor her, poor Shane :'(
    September 18th, 2011 at 10:47pm
  • captured_butterflies

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    that doesn't mean he's twenty, you know? :) Don't worry, their ages are there in my head, I won't screw it up.
    p.s anyone who has a problem with their huuuge age difference, I'd just like to point out that their age difference was part of the plan. I don't know why but it seemed to support the story better. :)
    September 18th, 2011 at 06:27pm
  • captured_butterflies

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    it says he's in his twenties :/
    September 18th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • L0V3E

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    love the chapter. Awesome.
    September 18th, 2011 at 06:13pm
  • SaturdayMonster

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    i love ur story, but i thought id point out that in the beginning u said she was 16 and he was 26, but in ur new update when she is 14 he's 20. so what im saying is that their age differents is off, and he should b 22 if shes 16 now. i just thought that was funny and weird at the sametime. hope that helped some, but keep up the good work. =^_^=
    September 18th, 2011 at 01:48am
  • Dud:3

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    Thankyou! I understand a lot more now that I've re-read. :)
    September 17th, 2011 at 11:14pm
  • itsjackz

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    im glad u changed the names i understand it now!
    but wich shane is she with now?? the good one or the bad one?
    btw, i want more!! update soon please!!
    September 17th, 2011 at 08:58pm
  • captured_butterflies

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    Okayy since there's so much of confusion, the elder (good) Shane will be Shane and the younger (bad) one will be Shayne, okay? :)
    September 17th, 2011 at 07:53pm
  • Dud:3

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    I'm so confuzzled! :S
    It's good though, I just don't know what's happening.
    September 17th, 2011 at 05:31pm
  • itsjackz

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    this chapter was kinda confusing
    but i liked it!
    update soon please!!
    September 16th, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • Ihatemosquitos8

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    UPDATE!
    September 11th, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • bernardbananahammock

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    who is the other shane, who's edwin for that matter? update i wanna know! D:
    September 11th, 2011 at 01:06pm
  • Tofindme

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    omg what happened. TELL MEH!
    September 5th, 2011 at 12:51am
  • StillStanding

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    I'm falling in love with this story-- update soon please! love it.
    September 4th, 2011 at 11:40pm
  • Star Angel

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    update soon please
    September 4th, 2011 at 10:50pm
  • Live.Love.Laugh.

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    Keep updating because this is really good
    September 4th, 2011 at 06:04pm
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