Great story
October 25th, 2012 at 05:50am
If You Give Up New York, I'll Give You Tennessee - Comments
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haha well i found it lol :)January 20th, 2012 at 01:57am
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Loved it...This Lily girl though...smells like trouble...November 16th, 2011 at 05:15pm
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HOLY SHIT! I MISSED SO MUCH! BUT THIS IS SO DARN PERFECT!!! I LOVVVVEVEEVEVEVEVEV YOU! <3 I LOVE THIS!!! <3October 28th, 2011 at 05:46pm
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She's really spreading herself thin...October 2nd, 2011 at 06:57am
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Damn...is she boy crazy or whatttttt!?September 26th, 2011 at 05:40am
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My heart just did a little big dance!! : )September 18th, 2011 at 11:41pm
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Oh damn...more strife for the couple AGAIN!!! lol this is no bueno! BUT TOTALLY AAWESOME!!! lmboSeptember 13th, 2011 at 05:06am
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I have to say that first, though this isn’t my cup of tea, it’s very well-written and you’ve obviously given this a lot of thought; I can see that from the characters, and the sheer number of chapters you’ve written, and the fact that this is a sequel. From reading the first chapter, I have to say that I love Olivia. I love how she stands out and I love the character you’ve given her. I also like Audrey, of course. I can see from the chapters I’ve read that she’s very strong-willed. And of course, there’s Caleb, who seems like a genuinely nice person, who isn’t going to ruin their relationship because he likes her. There are a few grammatical errors here and there but they’re absolutely tiny, just a comma out of place or a missing apostrophe, and they don’t deter from the narrative at all. All in all, this is a really nice story!September 2nd, 2011 at 01:47pm
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Oh yeah baby! He's in for the long haul! I had faith in him, I tell you. I DO! : )
As the family and maruo is concerned....TOTALLY MAFIA.. and an awesome twist if so! : )September 2nd, 2011 at 01:45am -
ABSOLUTELY INTENSE! And WONDERFUL!
Sorry it took me so long...Semester just started.
1. I love her new found faith...but dang she is pulling those drinks back quickkk!August 24th, 2011 at 06:50am -
woah, sorry Imissed the two updates, I went camping with some friends. BUT WOAH! OKay wow. 1. I LOVE that you brough t Brian in. I told you I wanted to see him back! lol and 2...I have a feeli could end very badly then get happy again,
PS. the pictures...photoshopped? IS that the face we should be picturing for Audrey??August 20th, 2011 at 02:29am -
LOVED THE UPDATE!!! Hmm is she really gonna go out for a coffee with Brian?? What will happen if she does? What will Caleb think? So many questions?? Need answers(: Update soon:)August 18th, 2011 at 08:10pm
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Ah I loved it!!! I can't wait for more! Please update soon:DAugust 18th, 2011 at 05:47am
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH : ) AHHHHHHHHHHHH : ) AHHHHHHHHHHHH! LOVING LOVING LOVING!!!!!!!! You are wonderful! JUST WONDERFUL!August 17th, 2011 at 05:45am
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OH my goodness. This was adorable!! <3 : ) I really adore how the relationship came together. I can't wait to see more, and hear more in their relationship and see the drama to come--unfold. : )August 12th, 2011 at 04:24am
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You changed the title!! SCARED ME!! I thought you deleted it lol. I'm so intrigued...oh Gosh. WHATS GONNA HAPPEN!?August 11th, 2011 at 02:13am
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Ohhhhhhhhh yessssss : ) THIS is what I have been waiting for.August 6th, 2011 at 01:53am
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Woah! Nicely done! The tie in is absolutely incredibllllllleeeeeeeee!!!!!August 5th, 2011 at 06:12am
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SORRY I'VE BEEN AWAY!!!
WOW. Its all I can say. Absolutely amazing. You coveredeverything we talked abou, and twisted it to even I couldn't figure out what was gonna happen!July 22nd, 2011 at 08:37pm
