If You Give Up New York, I'll Give You Tennessee - Comments

The start confused me: "we've been together for 11 days" are they dating...?

But YESSSSS!! This is the action and lovey doevy mushy gushy touchy feely extras I was looking for!!! HE FINALLY DID IT!!!! : D And she was so intune...almost like a dream or something. This was magical! YOU are MAGICAL! <3 BIEN BIEN!!

Wonderful!! Okay, so the fact that Audrey is working hard and really being able to show her excellence side is wonderful! AND his family likes her...even more wonderful for her! I LOVE HOW she is down to Earth in sense.

On another note...I'm feeling like Caleb is so close to the edge right on the side lines...but he's wedging into the friend zone. No? Yes? Yes? No? Idk...Work your magic, I'll pipe-up and watch! lol.

I'm also going to be gone to Europe for 2 weeks as well. So I'll be late on reading and catching up. ; )

Can this get any cuter!?!? I mean come one...plus you have me on pins and needles with the "almost kiss......but not one". loving it. AND where the heck are you finding these pictures!? They fit so well, its like a real picture diary. It's amazing. <3 You're amazing <3

I liked this one. I like them all,actually.but you already knew that. My only thing is that I would really love to see more emotional response out of Audrey on Caleb. We know she likes him...she needs to step up her game! However, your suspence is keeping me here..so lol I dont blame you . I just want caleb and her together!!! You are wonderful. <3

You are set the bar on men so high with this story. This is wonderful. I have a feeling the loser in the bar, isn't exactly done yet...lol

HOW did I miss two chapters!?!?!? LOVED LOVED LOVED THEM BOTH!

I can tell somethings gonna happen in the next one, hopefully. Between Caleb and Audrey...hopefully duh. lol. The way he stared at her holding the baby... : ) EEEEH!

Okay. So its here. I know my comments have sucked lately but I want to touch base on it now.

I really, really, really love the way Caleb describes Audrey. (you, duh. of course.) Its just so precious. And although I was a huge fan of Brian, etc all her loves really...I'm really into how much Caleb digs her. Its like he's the only one who REALLY intently watches her, and values her. I know its just a story, but I really love it. And I love your style.

LOVED IT!!! I like how timid Caleb can be, and then how macho and manly he turns sometimes. Wonderful. Absolutely lovely! <3 : )

AHHH! I about died when I saw this!! I am so exited. I loved that you started it off in Caleb's POV. I like where your going with this...I'm sensing that Caleb MAY be the final result--(EVENTUALLY) in Audreys Repitoire of men...? Yes? No?....I'm looking forward to it. : )