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I love your use of adjectives and your descripition. You paint such clear pictures in my head, I feel like I'm reading a published book! :)

Wow I like the beginning and everything, I think its really good. I also really love the layout and the picture, really awesome. I like how everything is explained. You only made a little mistake when you said 'Anna slide' and I think you meant 'Anna slid' (Sorry I can't tell you what paragraph it was in, I noticed it but I was absorbed in the story). I loved to read and am definitely subscribing.