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Frank y u so oblivious haha I hope nothing will go wrong with their plan D:
Update soon please!

Everything's just so adorable right now! I just love that everyone's happy! Though, of course, I always have a bit of worry in the back of my mind that something might go wrong. But I'll just ignore that. Wonderful update!

'Fucking Kristy'
BAHAHAHA XD This made me giggle for some reason. But once again, much love for this chapter and story and AHH THEY'RE GETTING HITCHED AHHHH SO CUTE AHHHH.
Yup. Love this story XD

D'aaaaaaaaaw marriage for Daisy and Frank! YAY! Loved this chapter, it was tres sweet and hilarious as per usual. The beach complex made me laugh out loud-it's so true!

Ahhh! I'm so happy that they are going to get married! I loved the last paragraph about the volleyball court-- made me laugh. Can't wait for the next update!

Okay, I'm back and ready to give a better comment! So, I absolutely love how this is written, and I love Daisy, and I love Frank, and I love pretty much everyone. I love the humor you put in this as well! I literally laughed out loud at some points. I think you're doing a great job writing this, and I definitely can't wait to see how everything works out between Frank and Daisy!

So I've just spent several hours reading this entire story, and I must say I love it so much. The only problem is that it's 5 a.m. now and I'm exhausted, so I'm gonna come back later and leave a better comment

That last chapter made me laugh so much, great work!

My comment only concerns the first two chapters, but I like to start by saying that I thought this story was really cute. I thought you did an amazing job with incorporating a lot of subtle details and developing your main character. I don't normally go for stories that are written in diary format, but I felt like you really pulled it off, so congrats.

That being said, I have to admit that Daisy really got on my nerves. She's a bit too wordy for her age, and to be honest, her condescending attitude really turned me off of her as a character. Though I get that she's supposed to be a bit rambling, I felt that at times, the rambling grew a little obnoxious, and as someone that used to keep a diary, I feel like no one writes down their every wandering thought in their diary (or their hand would probably clamp up like a claw ). I feel like that would totally work if this were an internal monologue, stream-of-consciousness sort of thing, but it isn't, and that's what made it a little unrealistic for me.

Anyways, I felt like you did an amazing job writing this, and I wish you nothing but the best as you continue with this story :)

Ahh this last chapter made me smile :) And I love the idea of betting the name of the baby XD For the record, I reckon it's a girl
Looking forward to the next update!

amazing update (like the rest haha). I love the fact that you're so realistic with the whole pregnancy thing and with her and Frank. I loved this story so much *__* I can't wait for the next update!

omfg, I'm fabulous. thank you :D

Another great update! I loved this one for the comedy value :) I also like how you're being realistic about the whole pregnancy thing and actually taking into account that Daisy is pretty terrified and has no idea what she's doing! I feel some drama coming up with that last part? Can't wait for the next update :)

ahh, you have no idea how much i love that you've started to update this regularly again. i love you for that haha

awesome update! can't wait for more.

Discovered this story today and I love it! The part when they had to say goodbye to each other at the airport actually made me cry a little bit haha! Update soon :)

“This time exactly 21 years ago, you were tunnelling your way out of a vagina. Well done you.”
Perfect embodiment of British humour XD God I love this story, it should have more comments, it's hilarious. Loving the maths metaphors too- I only find it slightly depressing that I understand them, but I think it adds to the humour and to the fact that feel I can totally relate to Daisy XD
Seriously though, I cannot wait for the next update, this is so funny!

still in love with this story!

haha dasiy u are a horny hormoneal pregnat lady lol an some how it makes the chacter out rageous an loveble!!!!!!!!! i love it!

I applaud this story :D

this is soooooooo adorable... plz update?! cause u love us? XD