im crossing my fingers you update. i love it!
November 2nd, 2011 at 09:08am
Better Men - Comments
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I love this story and I would really enjoy reading where the characters will go... Update soon? :)July 8th, 2011 at 07:56am
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DUN DUN DUN! Paul is pissssssssssssssssssssed lol
Can't wait for the next update <3June 27th, 2011 at 02:56pm -
Yay! I really enjoyed this chapter and I love how well written it is. You have me hanging the edge of my seat for each update!June 27th, 2011 at 06:40am
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Paul annoys me a lot, but I know he cares about her.
And Charles is just so damn sweet (:
I can't wait for the next update!June 27th, 2011 at 06:02am -
I love it.June 24th, 2011 at 07:48pm
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LOVE THIS STORY. :))))) I can't wait to read more. Update soon please. :)June 23rd, 2011 at 11:48pm
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Loved the story!
You wrote everything perfectly!
Keep up the good work :) <3June 22nd, 2011 at 06:17pm -
I am in LOVE with this story!! Please update soon!!June 22nd, 2011 at 05:56am
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ahaha, this chapter is soooooo sexy, lol
;D keep it upJune 22nd, 2011 at 03:10am -
Lol ooooooooooooo it's getting hot and heavy ;D haha
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more (:June 22nd, 2011 at 01:26am -
i like this chapter, soo cute :)June 22nd, 2011 at 12:51am
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Hmmm it's really strange. I haven't got email updates from this even though I'm subscribed D: lol
Anyways, awwwwwwwwww so cute :3
can't wait until you update <3June 21st, 2011 at 04:09pm -
I'm not a huge X-Men fan but I really enjoy your story.
I can't wait until you're next update.June 21st, 2011 at 04:32am -
I'm not a huge X-Men fan but I really enjoy your story.
I can't wait until you're next update bJune 21st, 2011 at 04:32am -
Loved Charlie's point of view ^.^ He's so adorable!
I think your chapters should be a teeny weeny more longer :3
Other than that, the story is perfect! Keep it up 8DJune 15th, 2011 at 05:00am -
Suggestion: "A mistake for you, of course. I’ve already told you. But, it’s your decision- not mine. I forgot my jacket. I’ll be by this afternoon to get it." should read better," A mistake for you, of course. I’ve already told you. But, it’s your decision- not mine. Oh, by the way, I forgot my jacket. I’ll be by this afternoon to get it."; it'll give a little humor.
Other than that, well executed! :)June 14th, 2011 at 05:43pm -
Love it <3
Charles IS really cute :3 lol
Keep up the good work :)June 14th, 2011 at 04:57pm -
ahhhh! I love him! (: <3
Great story!! (:June 14th, 2011 at 01:13am -
I like this. <-- Understatement of the century. ;)June 13th, 2011 at 10:40pm
