Trouble-Maker - Comments

Loved the incident in the store with Nasty. Keep writing.

Ohmygod!
I was in my mom car reading chapter nine on my phone and when I read the part about nasty's 'accident' I started laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes. My mom turned around and was like 'what the hell are you laughing at!?' lmao! Great chapter! Update soon!

That was cute! :3

It was so cute when he started pouting when she asked Jacky and not him.
Update soooon!!!!!

Chapter 8: Ooooooh Ronnie's gotta crush on the boss's daughter!!!! ^_^
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I love this!
Please update soon!

Awh...Ronnie & Atticus are too cute!(:

i like this :)

Awhh this story is so cute >.<

Very good as per usual but I was just looking at their myspace page and they apparently replaced their drummer and their bass player, which I think is sad 'cause I loved Mika, but hey whatever the band wants. Anyway thought you might wanna know that, wonderful updates, and I can't wait to read more.

Awh..Jacky & Nico got along good..and there's deffinately some flirty vibes comming from Ronnie & Atticus.(:
Good chapter updates! Can't wait for more!!(:

I would just like to say that, this chapter made me smile, because of Ronnie & Atticus's conversation towards the end.(:
Plus I haven't listened to Falling In Reverse probably since a few weeks after they posted stuff on myspace..and I haven't been on myspace for about a year I think..and I smiled so big when I watched the video you linked.(:

Really goooooood. Loved Atticus's last line to Ronnie about knowing his last name, I thought it was hilarious. More, please, if you don't mind.

I really like it already(:

I really like the story, its very well written, as well as your M. Shadows story. Can't wait to read more of this one.

:) cant wait for more!

Definitly a good startt. =)

I really like this so far :)