Heartless - Comments

I openly weaped. this was a beautiful story

It was...heartbreakingly wonderful. Normaly with these kind of stories you find peices missing like in a old puzzle but wth is story I am pleased to sayreading the ending was like finishing the puzzle, with every peice in place.

I first encountered this story on Quizilla. I was looking for authors that took their time to write and actually made characters characters, not "I's" (In an anoying, repetitive way), "You's", or "Yours'". I would like to see this published in real life. I definitely felt connected to Willow. Keep up the amazing work.

i agree with golden sparrow and everyone else on this page since i wanted to hurt Jace for not noticing Will's feelings sooner *^* wish jace never left in the first place

i lovvveee the story. but what the hell man! making me cry like that...so rude. Gah. anyways everything was great but the layout, kind of killed it. its so unflattering. you need a beautiful layout for a beautiful story...even though it made me cry...Willow is a really good character as is Jace but Jace kind of pisses me off in the begining, when they are young. I mean how could he ust leave willow like that! the fucker. Anyways it was really great, though i'm curious as to how Jace is going to go on...and I'm sad he doesn't have Willow anymore. But please don't write a sequel because i swear if ou make jace fall in love with someone else i just might die. although one about anna would be cute ^.^

My God.
This was absolutely amazing. Should have gotten more stars than it did. Beautifully written.
RIP
Willow <3

Fuck, that made me cry... And I have no clue at all why this doesn't have more comments and stuff, this is amazing. Was amazing. He shouldn't have died. I know like, everyone is saying it too. But in a way, the fact he was dying made it so much better as it gave the story an edge. It made it unlike most, positively heartbreaking but beautiful.

This is by far one the best story's I've read on mibba. It had all the perfect elements too. I laughed, cried, got frustrated,Willow didn't deserve to die so young and right after he got Jace back!!!!

No story has ever made me cry like that. Willow didn't deserve to die and Jace shouldn't have left him. I just... Wow. I'm like literally heart broken and crying because of how, not only was the story beautifuly written, but you did it in such a way it captived the reader and really pulled them into what was going on.
This is by far one the best storys I've read on mibba. It had all the perfect elements too. I laughed, cried, got frustrated, just about went threw som emotions I didn't even know I had. So I have to say thank you for letting me be able to read and enjoy such a great story.

i just read the whole thing in one day and there are tears running down my face! Willow didn't deserve to die so young and right after he got Jace back!!!! DX!!! Anyway, amazing job, really amazing! And so original. I never like it when a character dies, but you did it so well! Okay, I'm going to go curl up in a corner and continue crying now... :'(

i love this story! i loved it on quizilla and i love it here! i am IN LOVE with 'Heartless'!!!!! <3 i am a forever fan!! WillowXJace

What a bitch!!! Why would she do that, so rude!! Poor Willow!!!!! Jace better be at least moderately okay with him!!

I freaking love this story!!!!! It's so original I honestly have never read about an albino. Oh is he a black albino or white etc? I just want to know for the face features I'm picturing. AWW poor guy stupid best friend leaves him at school!!! I also love that you update twice each time!!!! ~sub~

I think Willow needs a love interested to make Jace jealous!

Aw, cute premise for a story. Willow is very... different? Lol.
I read the first chapter and I must declare that Jace IS IN LOVE with Willow! He is! So, I will read more, subscribe even! Keep writing!