An Unexpected Something New - Comments

  • removedhergrace

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    OH MY GOD THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL. I have school in like 20 so I can't leave the long-ass review that I want, but the last few days have been horrible and this honestly was the best part of them, reading this update. LOVE IT!
    April 2nd, 2012 at 12:59pm
  • BruinsChickie

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    pppllleeeeeeeeeease update soooonnn!!!!
    March 28th, 2012 at 05:08am
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    I don't even like the Pens, and I respect Sid because he's Sid, but he's not my favorite. BUT THIS STORY. GAHHH IT'S SO GOOD! I was super bored and found it and was like "What the hell, can't be too awful..." and I just read all of it and I love it. So much. Please update. Asap. Bless.
    March 24th, 2012 at 02:47am
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    Love it! Please write more ASAP I gotta know what happens
    March 23rd, 2012 at 03:09am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Maybe they should just avoid the club from now on. Only bad things happen there.

    I'm so sorry about not commenting sooner. A tractor trailer knocked out the internet and cable for awhile. But here I am! Lol.

    I really liked this chapter. They were so sincere with each other about their feelings. It was really nice.

    Can't wait for the next one!
    March 23rd, 2012 at 01:03am
  • soupy

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    I think Kris is a jerk for saying what he did - stupid drunken frat boy! He made it sound like Sid was complaining to him about his "lack of action" - which he wasnt. While I am sure that Sid would like to sleep with Hannah, he understands that for her there is such a huge emotional component in this physical act. And while I am sure he would like the physical act himself, he realizes it is not all about him.

    And I think that is what Sid was trying to get across to Hannah. After waiting this long, giving up her virginity should not be a spur of the moment decision. It should not be knee-jerk to Kris's comments, or the looks of the other women in the club. I mean she made Derek wait until their Wedding night (which never ended up happening, but still...). I think Sid loves Hannah so much that he is looking out for what is ultimately best for her - and in his mind, it is not a question of if, it is a question of when. Even if he has to wait until they get married, he will.

    And Jordan....he is definitely moody and I am wondering if he is harbouring a bit of a crush on Hannah.

    I guess we will see
    March 19th, 2012 at 06:41pm
  • pitts87pens

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    What a jerk Kris is that's for sure....I think Sidney handled it well...but i also think that he is doing the right thing about not sleeping with her just yet...great update...can't wait for more!
    March 19th, 2012 at 04:36pm
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    once we do it, we can’t take it back. Is this the way you want your first time….our first time…to be?"
    That is the key part of the chapter, that has to be the toughest thing Sid had to say to Hannah but totally the right one, What a total gentleman he was. As for kris he has some major apologising to do. Another beautiful written installment :)
    March 19th, 2012 at 12:03pm
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Holy crap! What did Kris do?! And what's up with Jordan? Update soon?
    March 14th, 2012 at 03:56am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Oh my. Derek totally redeemed himself there. Well pretty much anyways. That was so sweet though. Gahhh.
    March 10th, 2012 at 10:53am
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    She's testing him?! Well that's pretty shitty. Girls are freaking annoying.
    March 10th, 2012 at 03:44am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    I understand why she just let him believe she got back with Roysie but seriously, why do girls always have to play games like that. There is nothing wrong with being straight forward. Especially when you're so far in it already. The chase is good and fun sure but they are definitely past that. Anyway, I'm really loving this story! It's fantastic!
    March 10th, 2012 at 03:26am
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    Gosh Jordan's sweet. A whore for sure but very sweet.
    March 10th, 2012 at 03:18am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    He's an idiot. He better not sleep with the girl from the ball. Men are so dense, I swear! Oh and thanks for responding to my comments! I appreciate it. :)
    March 10th, 2012 at 03:09am
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    Jordan is so wise in this story. I like it but he needs a girl to come in and sweep him off his feet. Make it so he isn't the one with all the answers.
    March 10th, 2012 at 02:41am
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    BUFFALO. DEREK ROY. Thank you for including these amazing things in your story. Not enough of those around these parts. Even if Derek is gonna be a douche. I mean he's an alright guy but Buffalo's a small town and word gets around. He's....well never mind. Just thank you!
    March 10th, 2012 at 01:44am
  • samemistakess

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    Update soon! I really want to know what Kris did! He's quite the asshole haha
    March 9th, 2012 at 01:14am
  • pitts87pens

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    This doesn't look good for Kris, Sidney is probably going to freak out on him. It's good she forgave him because these two are too cute to be mad at each other but i still think they are going to end up sleeping together before they get married..Great update, Cant wait for more!
    March 8th, 2012 at 06:45pm
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    OMG kris, what did you do ? Poor Hannah :( another beautifully written chapter xx
    March 8th, 2012 at 07:09am
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    KRIS

    YOU IDIOT

    WHAT ARE YOU DOING? :o
    March 8th, 2012 at 06:35am