An Unexpected Something New - Comments

  • bxgurl95

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    Wow this story is one of the greats! Enjoyed even more the second time, you're a true artist
    April 9th, 2014 at 07:23pm
  • ktizzle1010

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    Really enjoyed reading this story!!
    August 31st, 2013 at 05:40am
  • bxgurl95

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    I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!! (Now I'm done)
    June 20th, 2013 at 11:18pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Haha you called Jordan's hand a paw
    June 19th, 2013 at 03:59pm
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    I'm sorry that I'm doing this annoying this commenting on old stories, but this one was really one of my favorites and I'm rereading. I really admire how you're able to make these guy-to-guy conversations not seems awkward.
    June 19th, 2013 at 03:11pm
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    Hahha sun shining out of Sid's ass
    June 19th, 2013 at 03:00pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Haha I like how it says aching libido twice within 5 chapters
    And "having the penis is a weakness" LOL
    June 19th, 2013 at 02:37pm
  • bxgurl95

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    I reread the last few chapters of this story and all I can't say is wow. This was a great one and it was so easy to fall in love with the characters again.
    February 16th, 2013 at 01:40pm
  • soupy

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    I loved your epilogue - it really made me believe in fairytales again. Ok, this fairytale had its moments of drama, but the fact that they both found their true love and that love endured through hockey, roadtrip separations and three children was a fitting end for these two characters that I really grew to care about.

    I look forward to your next story - it seems to be a little spicier and edgier - which I am sure will prove very interesting.

    Thanks for all your efforts - they were very much appreciated.
    December 31st, 2012 at 08:46am
  • Emmy2550

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    That. Was. So. Good!!!!!
    December 16th, 2012 at 06:48am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    The epilogue was the perfect way to sum up the story. I'm a bit sad it's over too but I really loved this story.
    December 13th, 2012 at 12:27am
  • bxgurl95

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    Granted it wasa story book ending, this storyneeded that and I believed it more because these two have been througha lot and they deserved it. I've fallen in love with the story and characters as well and sad to see them go, but I'm excited for your new stories so can't wait to see how that goes
    December 12th, 2012 at 02:13pm
  • tiffanyhabs31

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    Such a wonderful ending to a wonderful story :) great job!!!
    December 12th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • tiffanyhabs31

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    Such a wonderful ending to a wonderful story :) great job!!!
    December 12th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • Cali's Mommy

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    Great ending to a great story! I have loved going along on the journey of this story and I'm kinda sad it's over too, but it was a happy ending for all of them! :) I can't wait for your new Kaner/Toews story! :) :) :)
    December 11th, 2012 at 05:16pm
  • NMT82

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    Really great story, perfect ending.
    December 11th, 2012 at 04:59pm
  • steph1984

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    Awww, I loved it :') What a perfect way to end a perfect story. I do have one question though. How would you feel about doing maybe a one shot of Jordan and Pheobe's wedding ? I'd love to see how they got married.

    I can't wait to read your Kane and Towes story :)
    December 11th, 2012 at 12:31pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I definitely think you did the wedding justice, it was perfect :)
    I'm excited for the next update!
    October 26th, 2012 at 02:20pm
  • NMT82

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    Fantastic wedding, so perfect for them. Great story.
    October 24th, 2012 at 11:00am
  • soupy

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    The wedding and reception were exactly what both Sid and Hannah needed. It was the perfect compromise - it respected Hannah's wishes but it allowed for Sid to express his love and adoration for his bride. I cant help but think that Hannah would have been a little wistful after the fact, if ultimately her family were not able to share in her happiness on her wedding day - they went through all the past pain with her too, so they should have been able to share in her joy! It just goes to prove, that Sid did know best!!

    You captured the culmination of their "courtship" perfectly - your descriptions were clear and concise and it truly made the reader feel that they were there with the happy couple. You truly outdid your self on this one.
    October 23rd, 2012 at 06:30pm