Kill Me With a Thorny Kiss - Comments

love the story, subscribed!!!!

This is a really nice idea, and you've executed it brilliantly. There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes, though, but you could easily fix those so they're not that big of a deal. Subscribed. :)

Great story :) cant wait to find out what happens :)
if you need motivation just think of your ideas for book 2 and 3 because you cant start them without finishing this :)

wow, thats a tough choice to make..very interesting, and a great start..nice job,

i liked that chapter, and the title is beautiful.
i have to tell you though, that as much I love tthis story, the grammar can get a little confusing in the middle of this recent chapter. also, i think you mixed up names at least one or twice.

BUT other than that you are doing fantastically my darling, and hey, positive thinking is good, so if ur already thinking of the second and third book, then good for you!!!!!!

:D awesome story! it's really unique too, and a second and third book sounds good to me, please continue writting. (Subscibing immediatly)

this seems really cool, and a totally fresh, new idea. i cant wait to see what happens, and im definitely subscribing :)