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  • AlixTheCreature

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    Awee. He loves her. That was a awesome chapter.
    July 17th, 2012 at 10:41am
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    dsfasdfsd. SO GOOD. If I could marry a story, it would be this one. Just saying. (:

    You're an amazing writer. Don't ever stop!
    July 17th, 2012 at 10:02am
  • Itsyoursin

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    oh my god! I teared up..im like screaming at the computer "NO DONT MAKE HER LEAVE HIM NOOO!!!'' lol...yea this is a AMAZING story :3 :3 :3 It makes me love Jacky even more xD and I keep thinking when you make her dad drag her back home and stuff that shes gonna have bruises or something and Jacky and/or Ronnie(and/or the guys to) are gonna go nuts on her and her dad lol but seriously...THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!
    July 17th, 2012 at 08:55am
  • NommingDino

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    Not going to lie, I almost cried when Airia's mother told her that she and her father think she should stay away from Jacky. But now that her mother is understanding I'm okay n.n
    July 17th, 2012 at 08:43am
  • Poisoned_Veins

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    i was about to go banana sandwich on her mom lol
    July 17th, 2012 at 03:42am
  • ilikewalls

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    Haha I love all the punch the mom and dad comments I hope they change their minds!
    July 17th, 2012 at 03:08am
  • AlixTheCreature

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    But please, I can I smack her mom and knee her dad?
    July 17th, 2012 at 01:56am
  • AlixTheCreature

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    But please, I can I smack her mom and knee her dad?
    July 17th, 2012 at 01:56am
  • AlixTheCreature

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    Its. Is. Awesome. <3
    July 17th, 2012 at 01:55am
  • Arabella-

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    Nooo! She can't lose Jacky ;_;
    July 17th, 2012 at 01:53am
  • alonginginmybones

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    I was gonna punch her mom .__.
    July 17th, 2012 at 01:47am
  • xXforREVerXx

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    I hate that feeling because my best friend and I knew eachother for ten years. She moved and I felt dead for monthes. Her and I no longer talk. It still hurts but now I have a new best friend Macayla and life without her would be worse then losing my other best friend. Macayla has been there with me for everything and I love her with all my heart.
    July 16th, 2012 at 08:36pm
  • AlixTheCreature

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    This was AWESOME. Every time you update, I am never disappointed! I just REALLY wanna know what he said. Anyway, great chapter.
    July 16th, 2012 at 11:10am
  • Arabella-

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    Yay! You updated this! It was amazing as always, but I really want to know what Jacky said! Like I really, really want to know and it'll probably bug me for the rest of the night :P
    July 16th, 2012 at 09:46am
  • Rachele Kristine;

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    Oh looky here! You updated! WOO! *Highfive*
    I knew you'd come through one day. c:
    Haha.
    I loved it<3
    July 16th, 2012 at 09:28am
  • Designated Drinker

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    Updateupdateupdate?!
    This is my favorite story to read! haha(:
    July 11th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • faster.

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    Totally had to miss FIR live and probably the chance to meet them at Warped Tour today because I couldn't get off work :( Totally had free tickets waiting for me, as well :( Boooo.... [okay, so not really story related, but I'm sure some of you can empathize, haha] ... Keep writing! :)
    July 7th, 2012 at 05:02am
  • alonginginmybones

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    Love this story update soon! Very Happy
    July 3rd, 2012 at 08:12am
  • faster.

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    Digging this story as well, grrl :) (I just read "Textbook Romance" as well and wasn't ready for it to be over, so I had to find another one to read, haha)... Just a heads up, though: I've noticed a few minor grammatical errors throughout the first 5 chapters or so (that's about how far I've gotten, anyway, lol). Not so much issues with your writing techniques as they are typos, I believe, but I just wanted to let you know in case you wanted to go back and proof-read/edit to get everything perfect on your stories :)

    There are a few things that I thought seemed a bit unrealistic, as well (like, how easily she talked her family into getting her a dog, lol... but then again, that could just be one of your ways of showing how spoiled she is :P teehee). Don't get me wrong; I'm not trying to knock your writing at all! You're definitely one of the better writers on the site and I definitely get sucked into your stories... just wanted to give you a little constructive criticism, so take it as you will :) ... I'll be keeping a lookout for updates! (well, once I get caught up anyway... haha) Have a good one!

    PS- Also, I think I may need to marry this Jacky Vincent fellow someday. Get me a sexy husband, UK citizenship, good connections for my band, etc... maybe someday :P haha lololol
    June 28th, 2012 at 05:10am
  • AlixTheCreature

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    Can you pleasepleasepleaseplease update?!
    This is my favorite story! D:
    June 26th, 2012 at 10:43am